Uzaki-chan // Full Draft: Pages 01-10 (Sketch) (Pixiv Fanbox)

Hey people...(・∀・)ﾉ The rough draft for the doujinshi is finally done...!!! I decided to fast forward the last two pages so you guys can have a better pilot read. Please point out any glaring errors or small details you find. I already read it 50 times, but fresh eyes are sharper... 👀✨ I still have a lot of polishing and organizing to do before jumping into the inking process, but I'm somewhat happy with what I have so far. 10 pages was definitely too short, there are a lot of establishing shots and extra pages that I wish I could have included, but I tried to be careful and not overextend. The story is a bit bare bones but well condensed and action packed, so at least I did everything I set out to do. I hope you enjoy it...! Thanks for all the support... 👍✨