【Unused Sketches】Two beauties for take out (Pixiv Fanbox)

Thanks to all of you, the sales of "Two beauties for take out" has now exceeded 2,100 units! Thank you very much!

This time, I'd like to introduce some of the panels and pages that were unfortunately changed from the final product.

①First of all, the body jack scene. This was initially a bit more horror taste and decided to change it because I thought it didn't match the tone of the story.

②The next one is the expression on Rie's face. It was changed because I wanted to make the expression a little more evil looking.

③Next is the beginning of the first cosplay scene. I thought that he pose of Sena as Okita-san could be improved more, so I decied to change it.

④What I changed here is the panel where the possession is released after Kousuke is finished enjoying their bodies. I felt it was a bit gag-like, so I changed the way he came out.

⑤Finally, the pose of the two in the epilogue. I wanted to make them stand out equally, so I changed their poses here as well.

I thought it would be a shame to let these sketches go to waste, so I decided to post them here. Some of you may prefer these panels better than the final product. Feel free to let me know in the comments how you feel about these changes.

Thank you!