Upcoming month (703) (Pixiv Fanbox)

- Lyana Frostburn and the golden pony staff

(pages 20 and 21)

Note: These are the last pages of the story. after that I am open to

suggestions for possible extra pages or endings - no promises.

Page 21 is a re-used image with slight modifications.

- A new adventure? A spin-off?

I will use polls/discussion posts to see what people want.

The golden pony staff gained a lot of interest but ever since I added the hood the interest has been dropping with each image published. I'm not sure why since other artists seem to perform well/retain interest despite hoods. Maybe it's my artstyle or the story itself (I'm not a good writer I know...). Some people suggested adding hair, others suggested doing a follow up comic. Personally, I think it's best to simply move on to a new adventure. It's clear I still have a lot to learn and practise.

Q: A spin-off?

A: I've thought about doing a short story that takes place after the golden pony staff where Miss Mason tests new equipment in an attempt to automate the process of transforming and training new ponygirls. A malfunction causes the machines to turn on Miss Mason and she is rapidly turned into a ponygirl herself without a possibility of getting out any more. It's just an idea though. I have more ideas which I will post later this month.

Feedback and comments are welcome!