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The Ruined Queen P1 (Pixiv Fanbox)

Published:
2021-05-22 09:34:40
Imported:
2021-12

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Viego and Lux.. Will be more in future~ Hope you will like the story~ Thank you everyone for your support~ Love you~

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arkd

I really like your content, and am reluctant to leave criticism. Nevertheless, I felt this story was lacking substance. There was no tension, no romance, no transformation, no reason for her to like Viego or submit to him and it was short. It was basically: 'my queen'; "fuck me"; 'your not worthy'; "I submit to you (even though I am a queen)"; and done. Basically it was boring. I have seen you do so much better, I know you can do so much better. I know you did not ask for criticism, but I hope you take it and use it to do better.

shizumihanako
>>1882282

Thank you for your thought. Because I was followed the scripts so I was lost track sometimes.

minhtiedd

maybe next time you can let viego possess female