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I'm actually curious on what you guys thought of the 50 page side project, the Marin Guro set? (Pixiv Fanbox)

Published:
2022-04-06 18:15:53
Edited:
2022-04-07 04:00:53
Imported:
2022-06

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Reasons why it was short was it was one of those 50 page free requests. I made a bit longer coz I had fun😅 Obviously it was a main project it would have totally been much longer. Anyways, Believe it or not, I have yet received any feedback from the latest Marin set. Kinda funny but for real. What did you all think of it? Good, bad, meh? C'mon, can't leave me hanging XD

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cHRIS

I'm not a fan of guro. I prefer simple strangling and neckbreaking, so the set kinda turned me off. I would have much preferred one of those followed by a good necro scene with lots of body posing and sex positions. Others might like it though. I think it's a matter of taste.

Anonymous

For me I think the plot is good tho, having her kidnapped by a guy. But I think he’s play with her body too less. Maybe you should add more sex scene and necrophilia scene too. Maybe when he cut her heads off, he might as well use her body. Also, can you add some cum on her face and her body? I think it will make her looks more used up. But the other things is great! Good job man.

Karasu

more plans sex next time could be better

Anonymous

I'm (unfortunately) a fan of any decapitation. Good use of reverse deep throat which is also a plus in my book. What could be used is different expressions of death like cross eyed or one eye looked surprised while the other eye is rolling back . I believe veiled616 has some good references for those if you want to look at that.

Darksabre

Prefer more sex before the gore honestly. I'm not really into that part but if the sex and tension leading up to it is good, then its fine. The whole reverse dick in the throat thing though, I just do not understand. As someone who has hunted and cleaned their own deer for food, I can promise you that sticking it in that way would not feel good in the least. The trachea is not soft like the mouth and I guess people don't know this...

Anonymous

It was a very good set overall. The Marin model was very good, but the decapitation is not my thing. Did enjoy the sex leading up to it though, as brief as it was.

noahwatanabe
>>3309261

Thank you, I forgot to mention to everyone that this was one of one requests that i make with 30-50 pages. I got a bit carried away and made it a bit longer. If it wasn’t limited to be a short set, believe me there would have been more scenes

noahwatanabe
>>3310109

Thanks, I do want to add we guro fans love that shit lol. Logic doesn’t apply in my sets so yeh 😁 I forgot to mention, it was a request which was suppose to be under 50 pages but I ended up getting carried away. Obviously if it wasn’t a limited project, it would have been packed with way more scenes and a more care

noahwatanabe
>>3310192

Thanks so much. If the request wasn’t limited and short it would’ve been totally longer. It was actually supposed to be under 50 pages but I had a little bit more fun than I should’ve 😅

noahwatanabe
>>3309258

That’s okay 😁 unfortunately I am a guro creator before anything. So do expect a lot more guro in the future if you do plan on staying with me (plz don’t leave me 🥺) I’m joking but if this request wasn’t so limited to only 50 pages I could have made a longer project and many different scenes. Thanks a lot btw. I may make a few neck breaks and strangling but most of those sets are from requests so I understand people overlooking me being a guro creator. Pretty funny

cHRIS
>>3310411

I get it. I'm def not telling you what to make. Just stating my preference. My favorite of yours right now is The Classroom of the Elite set because it featured drowning and wasn't gory. Gore just doesn't do it for me. I was excited for this one because it's Marin, but I couldn't get into it because of the decapitation. But you're a create, so you need to create what you want or what fans request of you.

grandleader

I'll be honest, I loved it. I'm a fan of harder gore so the decapitation was great for me. As others have said, a bit more sex (both before and after) would have been nice, but I understand the page limitation.

Karasu
>>3310362

With this constraint in consideration, I am left with only a purely subjective suggestion. However, don't worry about my attempts at feedback. Your achievements/works are good.

Anonymous

This was GREAT! I would have loved to know her thoughts were from the moment her head was separated to the blurry look of her own body. Aside from that, Brilliant! I don't subscribe much in fanbox, but Marin sure got me really interested. For that, I thank you.

noahwatanabe
>>3315586

Thanks so much and thanks for sharing that, really like that idea. I could for sure add something like that in a future set.