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Eli vore Game (Pixiv Fanbox)

Published:
2020-10-09 10:25:11
Edited:
2020-12-31 13:25:27
Imported:
2021-06

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消化されたものが胃の奥へ送られる描写もつけてみました エロいですよね…

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HydroKirby

シコリティが半端ない 大満足

clip8806
>>1141045

ありがとうございます！ 僕も大好きなシチュエーションの一つです。 また別のキャラで描くので楽しみにしていてくださいー！

奶子就是正义

非常好～就是这样有内部描写的丸吞消化系简直太赞了～希望逐渐有更多的细节被作者绘出～

Anonymous

Nice work, though I think something might be off about the english translation. I can provide specific examples if you'd like.

SRG
>>1153782

just out of personal curiosity, what's off with it?

Anonymous
>>1161822

For example the translation of 助けて to "saved" might be better as "spare" in this circumstance. Or when talking about her stomach it's more of a rhetorical question than a statement because of the use of かも ending so I would have put "maybe" in front of that sentence.