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New Girl Taylor (Pixiv Fanbox)

Published:
2022-12-10 12:00:00
Edited:
2022-12-15 19:03:13
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Wanted to post the new girl I was working on. She won't be released until January but I wanted to get some feedback and critiques. Let me know what you think in the comments and provide feedback. Right now I feel something is missing or off about her but I can't pinpoint it.


EDIT: Fourth Pass. Thanks everyone for the feedback. Here is where I am at now. I am going to stop messing with her for a while so I can come back with fresh eyes, but if you have any opinions, please still feel free to share.



EDIT: Third Pass. Made a few changes, here is a comparison from first to current.


First Pass at her


Second Pass at her


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Comments

Anonymous

Set her up with Jordan Avery and Riley and they'll settle her down for you 😉😁😁 She's a Sweetheart 🥰

Ayato

Looks seductive. Especially in the clothes she wears.

Anonymous

Maybe futa Avery can help 🤔

ねこさん

I much prefer first one cause of the haircut (beautiful smile on the second pic), I would adjust a little the hair to not hide her left eye though. I thought her nose was too big at first sigh, but not problem when zooming. Maybe her chicks are a little too round or her jaw it too big? (quite visible on 3rd pic) Besides that hard to tell what is bothering you, she's very cute, we were missing one the best type brown hair + blue eyes now we get it :D

Anonymous

Wow Yes Yes lol

Anonymous

First pictures are better in my view also why not try something risky maybe a prosthetic leg or arm? Could lead to some cool scenes.

skaredsic
>>4613086

I'll likely include both hairstyles like the rest of the girls so you can have what you prefer hah. Everyone else in chat seemed to like the second more, as do I, but I still think the first is good. I will probably put it on her teen body. I'll mess with lower face structure a bit more and see if anything works better :)

skaredsic
>>4613304

Cause that would be extremely difficult lol Though I feel where you are coming from and that would be cool. I would have to make some kind of asset that could bend and posing it would be a pain the the butt. It also probably wouldnt be easy for others to save her and load her as they please. I honestly wish I could get more creative

Anonymous

First pass, the arms looked a little too noodly and the wrists looked wonky in the first pic, and the hairline was patchy, but both of those things were addressed and fixed in the second pass. I like the outfit in the first pic of the first pass best, but the yoga outfit is nice too. Overall I think the only thing missing is variation in her eyebrow expression. Her mouth expression has variation between pics, but her eyebrows are the same in each one, except for the first.

skaredsic
>>4613918

Thanks. I'll probably go back to the first clothing set then. As for the eyebrows, I kinda wanted to just pose her expressions more neutral so you can overall see her face better with some smile so you can see the teeth a bit. When I start using her then I'll actually give her real expressions

ねこさん
>>4613747

I tend to prefer long hair and I think it fits more on preteens, can I ask you what make you prefer the second one over it? :P Maybe because of smooth hair? Maybe people do not like the big part almost covering her eye? Or just because they are short? The second one is more popular among teens nowadays indeed, they don't want to be a princess anymore.

Anonymous

Excellent, as per usual! She looks great!

skaredsic
>>4614011

lol dunno really. But as you can tell most of the girls have short hairstyles in some way. Jordan's new hair style is the only one that goes past her shoulders. :-D

ねこさん
>>4614052

Mmmh Riley has a ponytail, so I suppose without it she would fit a mid-long haircut :P And that's why I prefer Jordan with her hair down hehe. It makes the girl's face looks younger, not as effective as twintails or pigtails though x)

Anonymous

Looking amazing

Anonymous

Looks great, going to do a teen version as well? Been loving your teen models lately.

skaredsic
>>4614891

Yah definitely. I want to end up having both versions for all my girls to tickle everyone's fancy 😛

Anonymous

It may just be the lighting but her forehead and upper face looks a bit bright compared to the rest of the skin - with the hairstyle I think she would benefit from some form of blush or shading on her forehead to better accentuate shadows. I'd try photoshopping a darken or overlay layer over the face decal file and use a dark red/brown brush to try and match the rest of the skin but maybe there is an easier way idk lol.

skaredsic
>>4615000

I lightened the face in Photoshop. I will adjust the body textures to match later down the road. Blush might be a good idea. I'll give it a try and see how it looks.

Anonymous

I would suggest an imperfection. Nose slightly crooked, a scuff mark on the cheek, missing piece of eyebrow or perhaps a slight rash. Something that will make her seem more lived and realistic.

Anonymous

Wow, thx for sharing her with us, i love her look and your improvents on her even made her still cutier.

skaredsic
>>4615575

Someone else suggested blush. I might try that. If it's not enough I'll look into a few of the other things you suggest

Anonymous
>>4615235

For sure, good luck! I really think only a slight blush would make all the difference - not too noticeable but enough to help colorize the face a bit :)

Anonymous

She's so perfect 😍My new crush ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Anonymous

See looks nice, so far looking great after seeing the 3rd pass at her. Wondering if you'll ever do Ebony style loli as well

skaredsic
>>4621857

It's possible I could. There aren't as many viable young looking skin texture options sadly, just like for Asian girls. If I come across something that could be useful in the creation of an ebony girl I'll make sure to save it.

Anonymous

Oh, she could be the perfect dominatrix-next-door for Jordan!! I'm thinking the hairline is a bit high over the forehead. I like the suggestion below of throwing some minor flaws into the characters. Mother Nature generally doesn't give us exact symmetry and life tends to beat a bit of perfection out of us. Maybe this might be the "tough girl" in the stable. She's certainly appealing, to say the least... :)

skaredsic
>>4626414

I was thinking the same. I kept messing with it and ended up lowering it already, but I may have to do it some more.