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Need your feedback on this animation! (Pixiv Fanbox)

Published:
2022-01-28 13:00:00
Imported:
2022-01

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here is an update on the animation, all the cycles are done but the one that does a little head tilt is not quite convincing me so i'll leave it up to you, should i keep it or discard it? i'm refering to the one in between regular blowjobs (at 00:20) I'm already working on the hair animation and after that i'll work on the color but since that will take time i'll work on Eri's mini manga in the mean time

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Anonymous

I think its fine looks great

HokusPokus

Keep it, I think I see what you mean, but it's a nice touch and change of pace.

nobodyyouknow

Easy keep. I think it looks fine

CarameLatte

Looks a bit too fast and hectic to be honest. Like she's almost headbanging at that speed. Might look better if slowed down.

Anonymous

I see where you are coming from, I think what might seem off has to do with the eyes. If you decide to keep the motion I would make it look a bit bouncier but also have her close/open her eyes during.

Anonymous

The head tilt seems fine to me but I agree that the animation is a bit too fast and snappy.

CarameLatte
>>2977077

To add, if the circular motion was a bit more slow and sensual it would probably look alot better? Then the rapid up and down motion slowed down a bit maybe have it look like she's suckling firmer as she pulls back and then pushing down again. Should be fine with playing around with the timelines for the frames than redrawing anything new.

Purepyre

Looks alright, though slowing it down some would help it

bluerice

I say keep it. Like everyone else is saying slowing it down just a bit would help too if you’re able to.

AnOldPerv

i think its great already. Just one thing, in my opinoin if the man's belly be bigger that will be more lewd and great

Ryoku Shikurawa

Slowing it down would do it better, it's too jerky since the movements are fast and short.

farfikuger

The head moves like it's on rails I think that's why it might look off. The earring movement in the beginning looks excessive for how fast the head is moving

farfikuger
>>2978146

I think the head would tilt more but that would be a bitch to animate. I would say pull up pornhub watch a pov bj and see how that person's head moves relatively.

Anonymous

If it could be added Tongue action.

Proper_Sub

There's always things that can be improved, but if you're asking about something that NEEDS it? I honestly don't think so, I think it looks more than amazing as is.