チラ裏　漫画雑記eng　♯527 (Pixiv Fanbox)

オローさんプラン変更ありがとうありがとうございます～(･ω･)ﾉ

基礎練習で使って欲しいキャラリク等あればどうぞ！

(趣旨に合っていればオリジナル,版権どちらでも可)

ついさっきまで友人のエッセイ漫画の修正を手伝ってました(*'ρ'*)

4p修正するのに1時間半かかったけどかなりいい感じになった！

台詞ほぼ全部修正しちゃったけど、すっごい喜んでたからOK

漫画で大事なのって読みやすさなんですよね。

どういった修正をしたかというと

台詞の省略をして文章をわかり易いようにまとめる。です

例えば

「診療代金

海外旅行の保険で

タダ！無料！」

の台詞があったとすると

区切れも多いし、３行になって説明が２重です。

これなら

「診療代は

保険で無料！」

で十分説明が足りるし、２行に出来ます。

字数が減ったことで字を大きく出来てより印象も強くつけられる。

わかりにくいかもしれないけど

４コマ漫画やエッセイ漫画だと超絶重要なテクニックなんですね～。

漫画って何から何までめっちゃ計算されて作られてます。

漫画研究が趣味なのでこうやって手伝うことが時々あります。

だけど自分で描けって言われたらかけましぇんε- (´ー`*)

最初はへったくそだと思うけど、漫画描きたいなぁ。

Thank you very much for changing the plan, Oro-san.

If you have any character licks you'd like me to use for basic practice, please do!

(Either original or copyright is acceptable as long as it suits the purpose)

I've been helping a friend of mine revise his essay manga until just a moment ago.

It took me an hour and a half to fix the 4p, and it turned out pretty good!

I corrected almost all the lines, but he was really happy about it, so it's OK!

What's important in comics is that they are easy to read.

Here's what I've done to fix it

Summarize the sentences in a way that is easy to understand by omitting dialogue. is

For example.

medical fee

Insurance for overseas travel.

Free! Free!

If there was a line in the

There are a lot of distinctions, and there are three lines with double descriptions.

If this is it.

I'll pay for it.

Free with insurance!

is enough to explain the story, and it can be done in two lines.

Since the number of letters is reduced, I can make the letters larger and make a stronger impression.

I know it's hard to tell.

It's an extremely important technique for 4-panel comics and essay comics, isn't it~.

Comics are made with a lot of care and consideration.

My hobby is manga research, so I sometimes help out in this way.

But if I'm asked to draw it myself, I can't... (´´´*)

It's going to be horrible at first, but I want to draw comics.