４コマ漫画の描き方解説　 Eng ♯1299 (Pixiv Fanbox)

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この前載せた漫画がどう作られているのかを簡単に解説します🦁✨

絵描き以外にはほぼ意味が無いので物好きな方だけみていってください。

ます漫画のメインのネタを決めます。

この漫画なら夜這いです💦

決まったら簡単に起承転結を作ります。

必ず４コマ目が落ちである必要は無いです。

起　獅子寝ぼけて部屋に入ってくる

承　グラウと間違える、脱ぐ

転　鳥さん驚く、獅子のしかかる

結　グラウが見つける

初期案だと寝ぼけているＧさんが部屋を間違え、鳥さんを狼と誤認して襲ってしまい、Ｇが部屋に来ないことを不審に思った狼さんが挿入状態で寝ている二人を発見してしまうという、修羅場になりそうなネタでした💦

搾乳のお返し的な意味合いのネタでもあった。

しかし落ちがいまいちなのと、寝ぼけていてもＧさんはそんな事はしないし、挿入はまだ早いと考え直し却下。Ｇさんは狼と一緒に寝るつもりだけど、鳥さんが勘違いしてしまう方向性に変更。

その方向でチビネームを作ります。

４コマは吹き出しの割合が多いので構図にも結構頭を使います。

赤いチェックが入ってるのが採用したコマです🐯✨

この段階では鳥が襲われると思ったら、４コマ目でＧさんがスースー寝てて

「あ、寝るってそういうこと」的な落ちだったのですが、それも落ちが弱い気がしたので

鳥さんが抵抗を示しつつも、受け入れ一人で盛り上がってるところでＧさんが寝てるという落ちに変更。

そのため４コマ目は構図を逆にしました。

ここでほぼ全体の流れが完成したのでチビネームをそのまま拡大して中ネームを作りそれを更に拡大し清書します。

３コマ目でＧさんがオチンチンを鳥さんの股間に押し付けてるシーンがあったけど

これだと鳥さんも勘違いしちゃうよなぁと思ったので泣く泣く削除

この台詞だと、最初から受け入れている感じもするので台詞も変更。

抵抗を示して盛り上げてくれる鳥さん。

台詞は大抵ネーム通りにいかないので、清書した後に流れの沿って考えます。

全体を通してみて、いいなと思ったら完成！完成後もしばらくすると気になる所が出てくるので３～４回は修正します。

これはＧさんが鳥さんを風呂に入れる漫画のチビネームですが、最初からイメージがほぼ完成してたので無駄な台詞やコマが無いですね( ･ิ∀･ิ)

こういうのはめったに無いです。

漫画は楽しいけど私自身が未熟なのもあって、今の力では１日１本も描けないです…。

でも少しずつ早くなっている気はするので、今後も挑戦していきたいです🐺✨

面白いかどうかは別問題ね…！

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Here's a quick explanation of how the comic I put up last time is made 🦁✨✨

There is almost no point in doing this except for painters, so please just look at it if you like things.

I'm going to decide the main story of the manga.

If it's this manga, it's night crawling💦!

Once you've decided, you can easily create an origin story.

The fourth panel doesn't necessarily have to be the fall.

Wake up, lion, wake up, come into the room, sleepwalking.

Seeing Mistaken for Grau, taking off

Tumble The bird is surprised, the lion cowers

Conclusion: Grau will find you.

In the initial draft, the story was going to be a shameful one, with a sleepy G mistaking the room for a room, mistaking the bird for a wolf and attacking him, and the wolf, who was suspicious that G didn't come to the room, finding the two sleeping in an inserted state 💦.

It was also the kind of stuff that was meant to repay the milking.

But the drop wasn't good, and even though I was sleepwalking, Mr. G wouldn't do that, and he said it was too early for insertion. On second thought, dismissed; Mr. G. is going to sleep with the wolf, but changed the direction in which the bird gets the wrong idea. .

I'm going to make a chibi name in that direction.

I spend a lot of time and effort on the composition of the four panels because there are a lot of balloons.

The one with a red check mark is the adopted panel 🐯✨✨

At this stage, I thought the bird was going to attack me, but then Mr. G was sooooooooooooo asleep in panel 4.

It was an "Oh, that's what sleeping is all about" kind of fall, but I felt like that was a weak fall too.

I changed it to a fall where Mr. G is asleep while Mr. Bird is showing resistance, but is getting excited by his acceptance alone.

Therefore, in the fourth frame, I reversed the composition.

As the flow of the whole picture was almost complete, the little name was enlarged as it was, and the middle name was made and further enlarged and cleaned.

In the third frame, there was a scene where Mr. G is pressing his penis to the bird's crotch.

I thought the birds would get it wrong with this, so I cried and deleted it.

With this dialogue, I feel like I've accepted it from the beginning, so I changed the dialogue as well.

The bird shows resistance and enlivens the scene.

The dialogue usually doesn't follow the name, so I think about following the flow after I've written it cleanly.

I go through the whole thing and if I like it, I'm done! Even after it's completed, I'll have to fix it three or four times, as there will be some areas of concern after a while.

This is the little name for the comic where Mr. G takes a bath in the bird, but the image was almost complete from the beginning, so there's no wasted dialogue or panels( Holy shit!).

This kind of thing rarely happens.

I enjoy comics, but I'm inexperienced myself, so I can't even draw one a day with my current strength...

But I feel like I'm getting faster and faster, so I want to keep trying🐺✨

Interesting or not, that is.

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