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MAKIBA GAKUEN translated. (Pixiv Fanbox)

Published:
2021-06-06 09:35:02
Edited:
2021-06-07 03:32:29
Imported:
2021-09

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Hi dear. I try to translate the details of the pixiv meetup project "牧場学園" what I am organizing. Please check and correct my English!

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CarameLatte

This looks like a lot of fun! There is a spelling error for the second profile - Favorite Things is missing the "g". I am not sure what "What to call self:" Is for as the answer for both sheets is "Me". Is it for He, She, Him, Her and such?

abubu-nownanka
>>1943944

thanks. In Japanese, people call themself BOKU, WATASHI, ORE, and various other words, but in English, it's just ME, so now I think it was unnecessary in the English translation version.

CarameLatte
>>1944239

Ah after looking into it, I see that mostly Watashi would be used, great to know.

BlueRain

Love your work! Here are some corrections I would make (as a native English speaker). Profile 1: A spirited horse girl who left her hometown to attend the Makiba school and realize her dreams of becoming a great racehorse. She has taken subjects of her own choosing, but was also forced to take a mating and breeding class, which reminded her that she doesn't have many human rights. But she never lost her energy and is working hard to achieve her dreams. Her foot speed is rather normal for a horse girl. Her mother is an excellent maternal horse, so she has many sisters of different breeds. She is also working part-time at "Horser Eats".

BlueRain

Profile 2: A cow girl from a famous dairy cow family. She is sometimes mistaken for a senior student because of her calm personality and large build. From an early age, she has been trying to become a good dairy cow and is very thorough in managing her milk quality. In her parents' home, it was normal for her to feed her three younger brothers with her own milk. Because of this, she has a troubling tendency to get anyone to suck on her breasts. After school, she works part-time at a "Milk Cow Reflex" in the downtown area.

BlueRain

Profile 3: He is a male sheep girl who was sent to the Makiba school despite not being not old enough. His mother loves him dearly and even has a child with him. He is Daisy’s cousin and also has another child with his aunt. His children are being raised by his mother as “little brothers” and “little sister”. He originally wanted to go home, but since he has plenty of senior student girls to spoil him, he feels content for now. Favorite things: To be spoiled by an older girl while he pretends to be her own age and gender.

BlueRain

Profile 4: Ex-student of the Makiba school. He was sober and timid, but after realizing that he could do whatever he wanted if he became a teacher, he studied hard and obtained a teaching license. He has a penchant for getting his favorite students pregnant and is often warned by the vice-principal. Despite this, his dedication to education and his advising skills have enabled his students to achieve excellent grades. He also participates in human rights activities to improve the status of Makiba’s girls. He always wears thick-soled heels which make him look taller. He also had surgery to increase his penis size. (The boobs are his own.) He is a half-brother to Kazuto Senba. He is not homosexual, but fucks Kazuto anyhow, because he’s jealous of the latter’s excellence as a racehorse and family environment.

BlueRain

Sorry, that turned more into editing than typo corrections. Please use whatever suggestions (if any) you want to.

BlueRain
>>1946149

Oops. I made a typo myself. First sentence corrected below: He is a male sheep girl who was sent to the Makiba school despite not being old enough.