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Anonymous

change "I feel embarrassing" to "I feel embarrassed" everything else looks good

captainPRICE

aunt!!!! beautiful aunt!!!

Anonymous

I think "I'd need the your approval" should just not have "the" and be "I'd need your approval." And the embarassing thing Derek mentioned.

Gabe_Sensei

Very good! Just remove 'the' "I'd need (the) your approval."

Anonymous

AWSUM! He should tell his mom to join them becouse he wants sex with her too!!

dasism

Cut out "the" and change "I feel embarrassing" to "how embarrassing.