Home
Artists
Search Recent Random
Posts
Search DMs Popular Hash Lookup Tags Random
Importer
Import FAQ
Register
Partychan Telegram ThePornDude
Home Artists Posts Import Register

morning with aunt. (proofreading plz!) (Pixiv Fanbox)

Published:
2021-01-05 11:07:09
Imported:
2021-09

Files

Comments

pillow fight

"the trouble is it's makes suck marks left on my nipple" --> "the trouble is it's leaving suction marks on my nipple"

Gabe_Sensei

"I use such a big one..." -> "The one I use is so big because I produce so much breast milk, it looks like it's made for cows."

Gabe_Sensei
>>1420582

What you had is fine this just seems more natural. After ああこれ?(Aah, this?) The ふふ　can be directly translated to fufu. It shows her amusement at the nephew's curiosity

Gabe_Sensei

Also in the future if you don't mind adding the text to the description so we can copy and paste that would help. The pic looks good!

オパイ（お仕事募集中）

　my nephew => 日本語の方では甥と言う単語が出ていないので、my dearの方が自然な流れに聞こえるかも知れません。 ”おばさん”を強調したい場合、Auntie uses such a big oneがよろしいかと。 　is it's makes suck marks left on => is, it leaves suck marks onの方がスッキリ伝わると思います。 こんな母乳おばさんの甥になりたい人生だった……