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Operator Girl (Pixiv Fanbox)

Published:
2020-08-04 13:00:10
Edited:
2020-08-05 04:57:29
Imported:
2021-09

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thank you for proofreading!

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Anonymous

"it order is clearly sexual harrasment." change to "that order is clearly sexual harrasment". i also think "it is clearly rape" could be changed to "this is clearly rape"

Anonymous
>>951649

i'd like to add that i'm not a native english speaker so don't take my word for granted.

ice ninja

in american english we don't usually say "upper-level management" since "upper management" already works. "Sexual experience? Yes I have. There's no partner at the moment" should be "Sexual experience? Yes, but there's no partner at the moment."

オパイ（お仕事募集中）

"oh,I see."の部分は単独の文章なので"Oh, I see."とした方がよろしいかと。 表情に乏しい女のレイプって、意地っぱりな魅力がありますね。ほんのりついたお腹の肉が柔らかそう。

abubu-nownanka
>>952118

どもっす！修正しました。表情に乏しいのでアンドロイドなのでは…とも思いましたが人間ということにしました。