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After much deliberation, the votes on the waitress costume and roles are now here. We now have Chapter 3 Bondage Cafe, which will feature Rebecca our boss in the office on our previous chapter now being dominated by her employees while wearing an outfit fitting for a Dom. But being the Sub wont last long because everyone should always have a fair share of being tied up.

So the basic summary of the story as of now:

Our 3 employees are on a day off and they received a coupon for a very special cafe. Little did they know this Cafe is owned and also a part time hobby of their superiors in the office.

So with the special coupon allowing the customers to make almost the whole menu free, leaving them with a lot of freedom to do whatever they want to the mistress or slave serving them.

But it wont always stay that way.


So gonna start building up the story for now and get to work on the sketches. And by the end of next month I will be able to finish the first 5 pages.

And as always comments, suggestions and opinions are very much welcome.


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DarkWolf2000

Would really like to see different costumes like the maid, bunny girl, etc.

Anonymous

I like the good cop/bad cop vibe to this, lol. It actually gives a great chance to see a wide range of responses from Rebecca depending on who's handling her (being more subservient and enjoying what Freya does to her while futilely fighting what Jackie does to her). It also offers a good opportunity for layered restraints if each girl gets to have a turn, adding to the gag and other restraints and enjoying their own little power trip. The mix of Rebecca being ordered to render herself helpless (like the preview with Jackie) and the girls physically handing her themselves seems like a fun idea. Moreover, since the girls are proper dom's there should be punishment should Rebecca disobey :3

Anonymous

Also, If Anne is also the owner of the place, she can always show up to dom Rebecca and the other 3 (after they've had their fun). Given her relationship with Rebecca this could also lead to an entirely different response to her predicament that you wouldn't see from the girls getting their revenge. Everybody gets tied up (everybody wins) :P TBH though it'd probably be better to keep the cast as is and flesh out the characters like you said. Sofie and Jackie didn't really say much the last few chapters and seeing them let loose would be fun.

Anonymous

That hand squeeze promises so much payback...I love the juxtaposition of having a blast and the other being very, very worried...

coredumperror

Oh wow, talk about a sexy start!! Not least because Rebecca was my favorite character from last chapter. :)

Arbiter500

Writing bondage stories is my hobby on DA. I hope we get a glimpse of Anne as somebody else’s waitress/slave, maybe with a layered cloth gag keeping her from having any dialogue with the main characters. She could even be a way of showing that there are different outfits—as suggested by DarkWolf2000; like maybe she’s a bunnygirl? It would be a good way of “populating” through implication your story’s world. It’s all your call thought, dude, lookin forward to it!

Anonymous

It would make for a fun separate idea, but it's not what everyone voted for. It's a fetish with a very niche audience. More extras or side characters means more to draw, and there's no point if they're not involved. It could be a great idea for the next fan art poll with Ryner's OC's

Anonymous

Let's hope Rebecca doesn't get free too soon. If the girls are gonna dom they better do it right.

Anonymous

I agree with the second half. 20 pages isn't that long and I'd rather it be more focused on a small group of characters. No need to waste panels and time, especially if if there's going to be a turn-around. Rebecca was the domina for an entire chapter and so she should at least be a sub for as long as the other girls were out of fairness ;)

Anonymous

I can't wait to see them order the whole menu on Rebecca 8D

Anonymous

should be a fun roller coaster of expressions. Rebecca seems like putty in Freya's hands while not hiding how badly she wants to kill the other girl.

Ryner_E

Thanks, can I get a link on your DA, I liked reading bondage stories and there are a few that helped in the making of the previous chapter.