[Hereafter] Chapter CXXXIV: Queen's Gambit (Patreon)

Not completely happy with how this one turned out. When I went through it line by line, word by word, paragraph by paragraph, it read fine and made sense, but something about the overall direction bothered me.

I'm still not sure what it is. I just can't put my finger on it.

Nonetheless, I didn't want to make this a one for one recreation of London with nothing but our new Caster to differentiate it, so I'm not handling Nursery Rhyme as simply as, "Oh, there she is! Call her Nursery Rhyme and then kill her!" the way things go in canon. How things are actually going to go, well, that's for later.

Let me know what you guys think. Am I worried over nothing?

EDIT: Moving down all the way. 3/3/2024