Homework Comic WIP (Patreon)

So I did some more work on that comic idea I got, i made some cleaner sketches of the first 3 pages. I dont know what Rings and Julie should be talking about on the first page, maybe just some generic " did you see last nights episode" kind of stuff. 

When I write stories I try to do what South Park dose with its story telling and that is having a series of "But"s and "therefore"s. Doing that is just a simple way of keeping a story interesting.

I think i need to tweak Rings' dialog where he questions if Julie did her homework or i need to fix Julie's response to it, The flow dosnt feel right with it

If any one has wondered why I dont draw Rings and Julie in classes with Emily and Lara its cuz they are both a year older then Emily and Lara

On a side note I think I will make a new $15 tier soon and I will limit it to 5 people at first just to make sure I can keep up with the work flow