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Wip/Preview And Opinions/Feedback (Patreon)

Published:
2015-10-20 18:00:15
Imported:
2020-09

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https://www.dropbox.com/s/dj87n4bt7itm88b/FSMC000093.avi?dl=0

So I just want some opinions on a few things mainly the background sounds. Along with the lightning. Does it sound okay or is it too loud? I will probably do a version with no sound effects at all also though. And lastly how is her wing animation??? First time trying to animate wings so hopefully it looks alright.

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Anonymous

The background sound is a bit too loud yes and the wings look like they do their 'flap' too often, usually through all the anime and such I've seen, during any type of movement the wings usually don't move too often, only during harder movements. But the rest is great, very arousing. PS: dunno how but, maybe u could make the 'voice' a bit more sexy during the humps. I respect your work, keep on the good job :)

Anonymous

Meh i don't think the background sound is too loud, It's halloween, It needs this peaky ambiance, And it goes well with the lightning; And her wings, I think they need slower movement, And when she's close to climax, make them flutter :P Idk, just a suggestion; BTW, I usually prefer short animation with many angles, BUT, This one is just begging for a cumshot, Just wanted to point that out.

SweetGrapes

Okay I love what I've seen so far, I think things that would also add to this scene is some thunder sound effects for the flashes, not really loud but noticeable. I also think an insertion animation would add ALOT to this scene as it did with the scene you're taking this inspiration from. But even without that I am loving what I see so far.

SweetGrapes

Something else I'd like to add is I think Mokrab is right about the wings, maybe if they flap a little less and also to add to Goblin Geek's comment about them, maybe have the wings kind of sync with her level of excitement? I think even if they were left as they are now it would be good enough, but I'm just saying if you wanted that extra cookie. Obviously a cumshot which I'm sure you already planned on. And the obvious things like more camera angles and POV which you already love so I don't need to mention probably xD. Keep up the amazing work Black, we love ya.

Anonymous

Oh brah, the background sounds are amazing! They go really well with this animation! The volume level is fine as it is. The Lightning is a great touch indeed. Make sure to have one as well when she cums! :p The wings could indeed be synced with her excitement levels as SweetGrapes says, and maybe have them give a hard flap the moment she cums, flapping hard once at each ejaculation?

Anonymous

Very nice so far, the sounds aren't too loud and the whole scene is amazing. I think her wings could be more "alive". I hope it'll turn into something bigger the situation is begging for it. :D

Anonymous

This is looking good! I think the wings are animated well, and the ambient sounds okay, although I would tone it down just a little bit. Here's somethings you could consider: -If the wings are detachable/movable, move them a bit higher since the should be more centered on the shoulder blades. Other than that, they're fine! -The background is nice, but I would add a couple of dried trees here and there if possible, so when the camera pans up to her, it's not just purple mist. -If you do add the trees, extend the visibility of the fog so that you get the vague idea of them. -Add some faint rolling thunder sounds. Otherwise everything's looking good! Keep it up!

Acacio Lee

This is amazing. I'm curious to know if there would be a cumshot scene for this one. If so then that would be a hell of a treat for Halloween. If not, then I'll be content with this.

Acacio Lee

This is amazing. I'm curious to know if there would be a cumshot scene for this one. If so then that would be a hell of a treat for Halloween. If not, then I'll be content with this. Keep up the good work so that I may try to increase my funds for you.

Anonymous

As someone who's owned a cock sleeve, you may wanna consider swapping the sides of it. I'm assuming that the pink is supposed to be the silicone part of it and the black a plastic case, and if this is the case, then the silicone would be showing where the cock goes in, usually.

Anonymous

Jesus this is hot, nice work JR. Again hope maybe flutterbat get's a chance to taste so apples soon mayhaps ;)

Ashtarte3DX

Looks and sounds awesome so far. I think the wings look fine, other than they seem almost untextured. Also holy cow please end that with a cumshot blowing out the end. o_o

Anonymous

Also a random thought. The 'pocket pussy' that Flutter-bat is using, if not too much trouble, it could have a Halloween theme to it, or Halloween type color scheme. Just putting it out there for consideration :)

Anonymous

I dunno if anyone else noticed this... but she had a distracting amount of breast jigglin. It seems like they were attached to strings or something. But other then that... looks gewd. Soundwork is fantastic

Anonymous

I love this, maybe make her get a little faster over time and maybe cum out the other side at climax? Just a thought =P

Voslar

Looks great to me! The lightning could maybe stand to be a little quieter, but not too much.

f40f50

I think the sound of the thunder isn't loud at all. Looking good!

zolkane

can you finish with cumshot always better with cumshot!

ANIMENIAC

would have liked to see the head of her cock just "barely" peak out the end with each thrust. Just where the end opening widens to show it but not come out.