DayZ Critique - Combining parts 1-9 into a whole #2 (Patreon)
Published:
2018-01-03 20:09:43
Edited:
2018-09-02 15:50:48
Imported:
2022-05
Content
Another quick update. I've managed to polish up another pair of chapters for final release. Bringing the total up to 4 of 9.
- 4/10 - The PvP Bias
- 8/10 - The importance of tone (new)
That second one might not be that final though. Since you've not seen it before, so there may well be small mistakes. If you spot any let me know. Be happy to fix them.
Tightening work continues. I need to re-voice some chapters to shave off some muddled points and make them more concise.
In the mean time I'll leave you with this - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IV3w3p7jnKE