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Today I'm happy to bring you my draft work for the next page of brightshore Ive been working on~ With a look at how Sara's mom ended up looking after these strange changes going around the city~  I hope you look forward to the color up~

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Brenden Seitz

You spelled “answer” wrong, but other than that, it looks good~

phoenix-alpha1

"Couldn't and That's" need to be corrected. Also forgot a comma between "wife" snd "she". Mother doesn't need to be capitalized. Also you might want to change the last sentence in the last speech bubble to make it sound a bit more grammatically correct.

Jagues

this looks like a great place to be if you want to be a bimbo so how do i move there

Masao

& from the context, it needs to be plural.