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EDIT: I forgot to clarify, I added a couple new variables in chapter's 3 scene when Lena goes to the pole dancing lessons with Ivy, just before the dinner with Seymour. Please load a save from BEFORE that scene or you will experience a couple bugs. 

Hello! Sorry for the wait, there was a ton of work to be done and that congress got in the way. The proofreading is done and I've solved the reported bugs, but there may be more, so please let me know any error or spelling mistake you might find. 

There have been a few challenging scenes to write in this update, plus a lot of stuff to take care of. Pushing out chapter after chapter, with so many art and so many writing each month can get taxing, and it's easy to sacrifice quality for the sake of speed. If I don't feel like a scene is flowing the right way while I write it I feel you won't enjoy reading it, and I want to avoid ORS to feel generic or bare-bones. People have said they enjoyed the Alpha, so it seems I'm managing to do just that for now! The scene with Ian and Lena got really good reviews (one of my favourites) and seems you also enjoyed the scene with Axel's pictures... I was pretty happy when I came up with it and I thought it would make for a really hot and interesting scene. 

Anyways, I'm already working on completing the art for chapter 5 and hopefully it will be out mid to late August. I think this next one might be packing the most content and hot scenes yet, and I will give you guys some scenes you've been requesting for a while... Stay tuned!


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Typo and Bug report: Made a pass through the new chapter, starting from near the end of Chapter 3. Only tested one "route". May still have issues with an old save. I tried to scrutinize everything pretty closely. I also don't point out minor mistakes that characters make when texting on the phone, because people text like that all the time. Chapter 3 Typo: Lena and Holly in Lena's room, guitar scene. No Ian. Holly says "What happen ot them?" Louise and Lena talk about Jeremy after Stan interrupts. After Louise says "Thanks! I hope this really works out...", Lena says "We don't have that kind of relationship...". I don't think I have her partnered with either Robert or Ian at the moment, so it looks like it skipped some dialogue. Ivy and Lena in the gym before Seymour date: "That's why I'm trying to achieve first, getting my pics reposted by modelling accounts..." It should be "That's what I'm trying". Seymour date. Mr. Ward says "His eyes search for a rarer glint, a gem he has no possesion of... yet." Should be spelled possession. Seymour date. "Decartes, huh? A fierce rationalist. And an individualist" Needs a period. Chapter 4. Sex shop with Ivy. "They had every kind of sex toy I could imagine... Some of them I even didn't know existed." I think it's more commonly phrased: "I didn't even know". Photoshoot with Seymour. Lena says: "Bellucci! These must be incredible expensive...!" Should be "incredibly expensive...!" Photoshoot with Seymour. Duplicate Lenas in lingerie appear when she says "Great! This bonus will really help me at the end of this month." Probably need to remove the Lena on the right as I think you're trying to center her on the screen. Restaurant right before Mayor and Perry. Robert says "No, he's coming just with his family. But you can imagine the chef and the manager want us to provide them with a perfect service." Should be "with perfect service". Lena home after the restaurant with Mayor and Perry. "Ed's news were just another burden on my back. Another pressing matter to solve..." News is singular (English is so inconsistent), so it should be "Ed's news was just..." Lena home after the restaurant with Mayor and Perry. "So Ian's flatmate is the Mayor's son... I would never have guessed he had that kind of connections." Singular/plural agreement issue, it should be either "those kinds of connections" or "that kind of connection" Jeremy shows Ian the Allison boobjob picture. Jeremy: "I count on you keeping the secret, bro!" Jeremy: "Of course, I got you." Jeremy: "Now don't go..." I think Ian is supposed to be the one saying "Of course, I got you." Lena, Ian, and Holly at cafe, after Ian decides how to hand the manuscript to Seymour Ward. Lena says "Well... It's being a difficult moment." Being isn't needed here, it should be "It's a difficult moment". Lena, Ian, and Holly at cafe, after Ian decides how to hand the manuscript to Seymour Ward. Lena says "Anyways, I haven't brought you your coffees yet! I'll be right back!" Holly: "Seems like she's having a hard time..." Ian: "Yeah... I don't know what I would do if I were in her situation." Lena is still on the screen when Holly and Ian speak, while they speak as if she's temporarily away. I'd suggest making her image dissapear, and reappear after Ian's line. Lena and Ian date at the cocktail bar, dancing: "She moved so effortlessly, much like Cindy... They both seemed to have a natural ability so move to the rhythm." I think it should be "natural ability to move"

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Eva can you share the files via dropbox ? that mega site made me create an account and if i don't i can download the file cause I exceeded my quota. Thank you

Brother Bethor

You don't have to create an account to download the game. I don't have one and never had any problems.