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［Manga］Castlevania Part 1 - Carmilla (Revised Edition) (Patreon)

Published:
2023-09-15 14:21:48
Imported:
2023-10

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Hello, dear fans!

I've made corrections to the subtitles for Castlevania Part 1 - Carmilla and updated the onomatopoeia to enhance your reading experience. Please re-download it and share your thoughts with me. I'm eagerly awaiting your feedback, so please don't hesitate to leave your comments. Thank you!


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78.31 MB folder on MEGA

31 files

Comments

Zanpakuto14

Honestly, I thought I had no problems with the previous subtitles. However, I find this to be a much-improved experience. The one thing I will say though is that I do wish there were more POV style panels. I still think it's awesome though! Also, Sharp toenails, like Carmilla's fingernails. Just a thought, I don't how many people are into that.

Jake Well

This was much better then before, thank you for revising! I read the whole thing and besides two sentences that are missing a word or changed a bit, everything else is much better compared to before. Love the improved onomatopoeia too as it's easier to see, read and very pleasantly designed! Here're the two sentences that you can change and fix up for better readability: --- original sentence +++ revised sentence Pg. 02 --- "How about do it my way?" +++ "How about I do it my way?" Pg. 25 --- "And I wonder how this one taste like?" +++ "And I wonder what this one tastes like?" Other than that, it's great and thank you as always Footcroft! ^_^