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Vibe Check: Endless Legacy

  • Endless Legacy is good, keep it going 474
  • It ain't my jam, replace it with something else 89
  • 2023-02-16
  • —2023-03-01
  • 563 votes
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Content

Well now, here we are with the last of my non-anime/western stories. Endless Legacy is taking up my brand new fifth slot in that set of stories, so I'm curious to know if its living up to expectations.

With Chapter 4 just going live (go read it if you haven't yet) and next time being the release of Chapter 1 to the public, let me know if you think Endless Legacy deserves to continue on down below.

Also, let me know what you're liking about the story so far, what you're not liking about the story so far, AND what you want to see going forward in this story. Won't deny it, been leaning on you guys a lot for these early chapters of pretty much all six of my new stories. Your ideas might not all make it into every fic, but having your feedback still means the world to me.

Anyways, that's all I've got to say. Fingers crossed that Endless Legacy continues to entertain for some time to come!

Comments

DJ Johnson

Keep it and turn it into a weekly!

Kejmur

I think it's fine the way it is. I personally wouldn't mind him being more of a switch, than pure dom in sex. As so far he feels kind of timid, but getting more confidence should help him a lot. So a switch would do the trick in my opinion. 50/50 sub/dom. Plot wise? 'Something Unlimited' where he creates his own brothel Empire would amuse me personally. And it would be ironic for him to do it here instead of his father like in that DC sex game. But again, in DC everything is possible. Time travel for example, like in Justice League they return to Second World War. Dimensional travel as well. On-time travel - returning to the past, to get easier access to mythical creatures like unicorns, etc. would make sense with his power. In the Justice League cartoon we also know Arthurian legends show up as an important plot point (Morgaine Le Fey being one of the big bad villains in the show), so 'time jump' there would be an interesting arc IMO.

Collar Spider

I think the whole building up power is interesting, it'll be fun to build him as we go along and to eventually see where he ends up at. As for the sexy bits, well there's hasn't been much of that yet, so we'll see. People do seem interested in not having him be all dom macho man and honestly I can get that. Even as someone that really like dom/sub, sex slave, etc. I think having a character that was so weak before could make them less likely to be all power mad, I say "could" cause it could go in the complete opposite direction. Anyway I look forward to see where this ends up going.

Kejmur

Pretty much I don't feel him going full dom with his characterization so far. Of course, something drastic may always happen to change it, but it doesn't click with me in this specific case. But also going full sub would be IMO bad for his characterization as well. Pretty much staying as 'weak' wouldn't do his confidence any favors. Some part of me would find it interesting from a roleplaying character perspective, but it would affect long-term smut and his own pretty weak will at the moment, so long-term it would hurt him. And well, in the end I think we want him to 'win'. At least over his own asshole of a father. So 'switch' is the middle ground which I think we can all agree with. And that makes sense here. He needs some confidence boost while going full ham in the other direction doesn't fit the meek part of him. Also, my preference leans in the switch direction, so yeah, the bias kind of is here. Variety is the spice of life for me. But I also remember Cambrian's scenes like the manic Harley Quinn dom scene in his HP / DC story (which also fits her special brand of crazy), so he can write it. It just barely happens in his case. Also, Mercy becoming his first sex teacher, and the head of the potential harem, while being more or less his social equal would be an interesting plot twist. Also, I feel like Mercy deserves a higher social status and someone who will appreciate her for who she is, and for needing to deal with the friggin Lex Luthor character, even if she doesn't see it this way.