Layla's punishment (Genshin Impact) (Patreon)

Hello guys! As you can see, I just recently started drawing pics with dialogues and I would like to hear your feedback about it :D

How do you like the "plot" in my last artworks and specifically in this one? Would you like to correct or add something to this artwork? I will be glad to hear your opinion or any advice!

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Also I see what my patreon is reeealy grown up recently (⊙_⊙) Thank you for all your support!