re: Ep1 (Patreon)

Here's a reworked Episode 1 for better pacing and character depictions. YWAM started out as a short story but was later changed to a longer format, so I felt the early episodes could use a massive revamp to fit the model.

I partnered up with the renowned writer/editor dogshitjay for this episode! I've learned so much from their pointers 🙏

I'll post this on Webtoon and Tapas once the next few episodes are reworked as well. (I might change some wording near the end haha.)