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Heading out of the hotel room and into the world. Is our newly named Gwen ready for what lurks outside? See you next month with more. 


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Martin Lock

All good stuff. As Ken/Gwen is talking to him/herself, some abbreviation seems okay. I'm not sure that "infront" is normally just one word. I do get a slight case of proofreadingitis sometimes, so forgive me if I query "for reals now now," "going to be problem," maybe talking about credit cards etc in the plural should be "them" rather than "it." "Wear out the hotel," or should it be "outside"? Anyway, it's all moving along nicely...

roseleaf

Thanks for the catches. I was in a bit of a rush lettering this one. December was a rough month. Those will get corrected. Sorry about pushing out errors. I want you all to have good stuff.