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99. Prejudice

***

I stood over Edithe in the courtyard just before the temple. A flaming scythe rested gently in my hand as I twirled in over my shoulder. The assassin had been Level 72. Perhaps he would have been a problem for me before I left Viechester. But now, especially with the element of surprise on my side, he was disposed of in an instant.

Smiling, I greeted my companion who stared at me with round eyes.

“Hi. How have you been?”

My words took a moment for her to register; she blinked a few times before opening her mouth, responding to me in an uncertain voice.

“I-I… Salvos?”

“That’s me!”

I happily nodded. Edithe’s gaze fixed one me, almost like she couldn’t believe I wasn’t actually here.

“How— how did you get here?”

“I asked for directions! Hadrian told me where you were.”

“He did? Does that mean the battle is over?”

I eagerly nodded my head.

“They’re on their way to the training grounds now. They’re going to end the siege there too!”

“They are?”

Edithe asked again. Her confusion was evident. Perhaps she had hit her head when that assassin nearly killed her? I gave her a thumbs up.

“Yep—”

“Preposterous!”

A voice cut me off. I turned around to face an angry man. He wore a fancy shirt with a familiar crest woven into it. Narrowing my eyes, I took a second look at his face.

“...Stephen?”

His face was filled with fury. As if someone had interrupted his sleep time— or whatever else Humans got mad about.

“Are you saying Orbus was defeated? Impossible.”

I shrugged, not knowing who this Orbus was.

“That’s what I saw when I arrived.”

“Ridiculous. If he’s defeated then that means the time and resources we spent here was wasted. We can’t just return empty handed, especially not without what we came here for— unless…”

Stephen studied me with a curious expression. Then he spread his arms wide, stepping forward.

“Ms Salvos, it seems you’ve leveled quite a bit since we’ve last met. You’ve almost reached Platinum too.”

“I have. And?”

He raised a hand out, smiling with one of those conniving looks Humans had when they were scheming for something. The kind Daniel had on his face when he thought he was sneaky in trying to convince me to let him sleep in. I didn’t buy it.

“What say you reconsider the offer I made you the last time. I promise you that we’ll be able to provide what’s necessary for your Class advancement to be as… good as possible. With you in our company, I promise you you’d be able to hit Diamond— even Elite— in no time.”

I raised an eyebrow at him.

“Do you even have an Elite in your company?”

As far as I was aware, those were Level 150 and above. The Human man drew his lips into a thin line.

“No. But you could be the first.”

I tilted my head up, considering it.

“That does sound tempting. If I do become the first Elite in your company, I’m sure everyone will respect me very much.”

That sounded very nice. Hearing praises everywhere I went was certainly a good thing; it would be like when I first saved Silvergrove and everyone in the city gazed at me with awe and wonder. I liked that.

Stephen smirked.

“It certainly would.”

“You can’t be serious, Salvos?”

Edithe spoke up in a hushed voice behind me.

“These guys just attacked our company. They killed so many of our members!”

Your members.”

I corrected her. I clasped my hands together, smiling.

“They didn’t kill any of my companions. Although they would have if I was a tad bit slower. Huh.”

I glanced between Edithe and Stephen.

“I guess I probably shouldn’t go with them.”

“Are you really going to turn us down twice? That would be such a foolish choice! And what? Because that woman told you to say no?!”

Stephen spat, glaring daggers at my companion. I shook my head.

“No. She’s not ‘that woman’. She’s my companion. And I do have another reason for it.”

I looked at Stephen. At the way he looked at me. The Human man saw opportunity, not any concern for me. Not any care for Salvos.

It was something I was used to by now. Only my companions truly cared for me as Salvos. Not Saffron. Not Faith. Not Helen, Jaakko, or Zack.

They all didn’t truly see who Salvos was. Who I was.

I bared my teeth back at Stephen. He was Level 81. The assassins behind him were Level 73, 48, 54, 45, and 51. Despite being lower leveled, they instantly tensed, realizing something was off. He didn’t, and waited for me to spread my arms out wide.

“Even if I wanted to join your company, let me ask you this question, Stephen: would you even accept me?”

He narrowed his eyes then snorted.

“Of course we would. A recruit with as much potential as you would be gladly accepted among our ranks. We’ll even spare your friends too.”

“No. I don’t mean accept me… or this.”

I gestured at myself.

“Whatever this is. No— I mean will you accept me?”

The man blinked as a savage grin spread across my face. He thought he was recruiting a Human. Maybe someone to be reasoned with. Someone who thought the same way he did.

But I wasn’t any of that. My logic was not the same as his. We would never meet eye to eye. It was a simple fact: one which I had known since I was born, but never really embraced. But being in this plane and having it suppressed from me— kept away from me— then speaking to Lily, I finally realized it in its whole truth.

I am a Demon.

***

“No. I don’t mean accept me… or this. Whatever this is. No— I mean will you accept me?”

Stephen couldn’t help but cock a brow at the odd question coming from the silver haired woman. She took a step forward, golden eyes flashing in the moonlight. Then she let her scythe disappear and grabbed something from her neck.

He frowned as she tossed aside an object. It looked like an Necklace of Obfuscation. Has she been hiding her level this whole time? he thought, grabbing for his sickle. But no. His [Identification] worked on her the same, revealing the same level as before.

Only one thing changed about it and that was her Class. She wasn’t a [Rogue], she was a…

[Mage - Lvl. 68]

A [Mage]...? But that wasn’t right either. The Class stayed static for a moment, before fizzling like a haze spell had been cast in his mind. The words  almost grew muddled, shifting— changing.

[̶̼̓͘͝M̶̥͙͇̫͎̾̽̒̎̈̈̄̚͝ã̷̯̣̙̺̱̹̿̏̈̇̈́́g̴̦͓͚̿e̶̙̻̬̩͂̃͐͛̆̄̍̕ ̸̣̳̺́̔͂̒̑̋-̶͉̙̫̘̣̰͖̺̥͍̆͛̓̃̃͐̑͝ ̸̨̥̭̞̼͗͂̎̾́L̴̺̭̦̻̻̓̈́̒̚͠v̴̟̫̣͈̹̙͛̕͝l̷̨̛̜͈̠̬̳̱̥̮̋͂̌̂́͆.̶͇̂ ̵̜͙̬͕̭̀̒̾͠6̵̜̫͔̦̫̺̬͂͜͠8̸̖̥͉̹̬͎̰͖͇͇̀̐́͗̈́̂̒͌͘͠]̵̡͍̝̼̝͚̪̯͉̞̊̓͝

Squinting, Stephen tried to identify her once more. And again, he got a different result.

[҉C҉h҉a҉n҉g҉e҉l҉i҉n҉g҉ ҉-҉ ҉L҉v҉l҉.҉ ҉6҉8҉]҉

It was less misshapen now. Almost fully formed. He identified her one last time as pops resounded, like powerful firecrackers going off at a glacial pace.

[Changeling - Lvl. 68]

His eyes grew wide as he realized what it told him. He had focused too much on his [Identification], he didn’t even realize the silver haired woman was transforming into a silver haired beast.

No— not a beast. A Demon.

The large, lanky Demon straightened. Her spine rippled with cracks, forming tiny bumps lining up the surface of her back. She placed her two clawed hands on the ground, each palm large enough to fit the man’s head whole.

Dozens of sharp teeth revealed itself in the skull-like face of the Demon. It stared down at him with two gleaming eyes. An almost hoarse but eerily soft voice broke Stephen from his stupor. It spoke a single word.

“Well?”

Stephen drew his sickle and aimed it at the Demon.

“Kill it!”

“Thought so.”

The words came from it like an angry growl. Stephen had meant to back away from the Demon, assess the situation and its power. But as he blinked and out of existence, he lashed out, [Flash Step] carrying him a dozen paces forward. He wasn’t sure why he had no control over his body. Just that he swung the blade down vertically, only to slice through air.

He stumbled forward, confusion and fear striking into him. He realized that the Demon was now behind him, its body wreathed in flames. Like a beast of fire.

It streaked its claws against Stephen’s back. He cried out in pain as blood splattered on the cool  ground. The Platinum Rank adventurer whirled around, striking for the Demon’s neck—

And it was like his sickle struck stone. Its tip was lightly touching the Demon’s skin, not even leaving behind a small cut. It grinned and the fire around its body blazed furiously. It seemed to gather around her neck, close to his hand.

It burned him, causing him to drop his weapon and cry out in pain. And yet, something compelled him to strike it, even without a weapon as his arms burned with each strike, he attacked it. Why am I doing this— what’s going on?! Just as he thought the Demon was going to bite his head off, an assassin appeared behind it and plunged a dagger through its spine.

This time, the attack seemed to work. Stephen wasn't sure why it did, but it gave him the reprieve he needed to back away. He was suddenly able to move on his own. But his still panic-filled mind did not consider the possibility of a Demon using artifacts. Why would it?

The Demon grabbed the assassin, its entire form blurring as it threw him off its back. Then another assassin came, and it tore through her easily. Stephen watched as her body was sheared in half, exploding into a pile of guts and gore.

He stared at the corpse on the ground, at his burned hand and the clawed mark dragged across his back, then at the Demon tearing up two more assassins as they approached it. And he made the only logical decision he could.

Stephen ran.

He made a mad dash straight for the temple. Perhaps he could try to escape into the alleyways and side streets to get away from the Demon. But it was somehow faster than him. It would track him down and kill him easily.

So, he continued his path of escape, heading to where he could find reinforcements. He paused only for a moment to look at Edithe. The red haired woman was lying helplessly on the ground, staring just as he did at the bloodbath happening before her. He could have taken her as a hostage. But what kind of an idiot tried to use a hostage against a Demon?!

Winding down the hallways of the Sanctum of Elements, Stephen desperately hoped he would find some [Priests]. They were specialized in dealing with Demons. They should have been. But when he reached the sleeping quarters of the temple, he realized he wouldn’t be able to get their help until dawn.

The entire section was sealed off. A powerful magic that he could not undo was there, blocking him from his only hope. Soft footfalls echoed behind Stephen as a shadow passed through his peripheral vision.

He spun around in a panic and continued running, [Flash Step] carrying him as fast as he could away from the pursuing Demon. Stephen turned corner after corner, hearing the footsteps disappear and fade into the distance.

Slowing to a stop, relief and air filled the man’s lungs before he heard some voices coming from a nearby chamber. Stephen hurried over to find five assassins— some of those he had left behind at the temple keep an eye on William— there.

He opened his mouth, ready to give them orders to hunt the Demon down. But he paused. They looked tired. Coated in sweat. Why were they exhausted from just standing around—

And the Demon bounded out of the darkness, tearing a head off. The assassins instantly tried to scatter, one of them fruitlessly attacking the Demon only to be easily ripped apart. Stephen stumbled back as its form zipped through the darkness, glowing even brighter than before with brilliant, blue flames.

Another assassin fell. Then its attention turned to him. A series of [Flash Steps] carried him straight past a fleeing assassin. Stephen shoved the coward back towards the Demon, shouting.

“What are you doing? Kill it!”

The poor woman stared at him for a moment, shocked by his order. He didn’t expect her to actually stop the Demon— she was only Level 42, after all. He just wanted her to slow it.

And she did. For only a moment. Then the Demon was on him again.

Stephen’s legs carried him as fast as he could through the labyrinth that suddenly was the Sanctum of Elements. No matter where he went, no matter where he hid, the Demon would always find him.

Red liquid sprayed across the ground as he watched the last of his assassins fall to the Demon. Only he was left for it to hunt down. He spun and ran again. Fleeing from the monster he had set upon himself.

I have to get help! Stephen thought as he raced through the temple. I have to get the city guards!

Stephen ran down the last of the hallways until he saw light up ahead, filling the shape of a doorway. It was the front entrance of the temple. The one that led to the city square. Surely there would be someone there to help him!

If he could get the city against this Demon, he would be safe!

A burning pair of chains wrapped around Stephen’s legs, tying them together and forcing his face to the ground. He tried to pick himself up and scramble forward, but the chains dragged him further back down the tunnel.

Stephen fought helplessly until he came face to face with a terrifying maw. The Demon stared down at him, teeth bared menacingly. An almost cruel grin spread across its face. Stephen whimpered as he threw a punch. He had used up all his mana and could no longer use [Flash Step] or half his Skills.

This single [Quick Attack] was all that he could do. It rocked the Demon’s head back. Only for it to grasp his hands and slam them down, digging deep into his skin with its claws. Its mouth opened, stopping just inches from his face as he closed his eyes and leaned back.

“P-please... d-don’t eat me!”

He squeaked. The Demon paused, staring at him curiously. Then a grumbling escaped its lips. A… laugh?”

“I’m not going to eat you.”

It spoke, shaking its head. Stephen almost sagged in relief, until he felt a sharp pain run through his nether region. Warm liquid spilled from his waist as he realized the Demon’s claws were wrapped around his most delicate parts.

“I’m going to do something even worse.”

“No—”

It pulled and he screamed. He screamed and flailed his arms, crying out in pain. For somebody to save him. But no one came.

No one from the city square heard his death. Why would they? It was empty, after all. A company war was ongoing, and no one wanted to be caught in the crossfire.

***

Defeated [Dual Bladed Rogue - Lvl. 54]!

Less experience is awarded for defeating an enemy at least 10 levels below you!

Defeated [Vanish Spellsickle  - Lvl. 81]!

More experience is awarded for defeating an enemy at least 10 levels above you

General Skill [Advanced Mana Manipulation] Level Up!

[Advanced Mana Manipulation - Lvl. 4] -> [Advanced Mana Manipulation - Lvl. 5]!

Experience is awarded for the leveling of a General Skill!

General Skill [Racial Skill: Mortal Form] Level Up!

[Racial Skill: Mortal Form - Lvl. 2] -> [Racial Skill: Mortal Form - Lvl. 3]!

Experience is awarded for the leveling of a General Skill!!

Subspecies [Midday Changeling] Level Up!

[Midday Changeling – Lvl. 68] -> [Midday Changeling – Lvl. 69]

Gained 5 Stat Points and 3 Skill Points!

Subspecies [Midday Changeling] Level Up!

[Midday Changeling – Lvl. 69] -> [Midday Changeling – Lvl. 70]

Gained 5 Stat Points and 3 Skill Points!

Subspecies [Midday Changeling] Level Up!

[Midday Changeling – Lvl. 70] -> [Midday Changeling – Lvl. 71]

Gained 5 Stat Points and 3 Skill Points!

Salvos (Death of the Destroyer)

Species: [Greater Demon]

Subspecies: [Midday Changeling] - Lvl. 71

General Skills:

[Advanced Mana Manipulation] - Lvl. 5

[Identification] - Lvl. 5

[Racial Skill: Universal Language Comprehension] - Lvl. 1

[Racial Skill: Mortal Form] - Lvl. 3

[Rest] - Lvl. 3

[Title Skill: Zealous Call] - Lvl. 2

Stats:

[Available Stat Points: 0]

[Vitality]: 70 (+5)

[Strength]: 43 (+5) (+2)

[Endurance]: 65 (+5)

[Wisdom]: 98 (+5)

[Agility]: 150 (+5)

Skills:

[Available Skill Points: 1]

[Advanced Fire Creation] - Lvl. 30 (Maxed)

[Charge of Embers] - Lvl. 10 (Maxed)

[Fire Strike] - Lvl. 10 (Maxed)

[Ignition] - Lvl. 5 (Maxed)

[Scorching Wave] - Lvl. 10 (Maxed)

[Self Haste] - Lvl. 10 (Maxed)

[Passive - Blue Flames] - Lvl. 20 (Maxed)

[Passive - Deadly Instincts] - Lvl. 10 (Maxed)

[Passive - Weapon Mastery] - Lvl. 20 (Maxed)

[Evolution Available]

Species Evolution:

[Greater Demon] -> [Greater Demon of Pride]

Requirements for four Subspecies evolutions have been met!

Subspecies Evolution:

[Asura Changeling]

An [Asura Changeling] is a [Changeling] that lives amongst Spirits and mortals as friends. A mortal at day and a Demon at night, they appreciate the wonders of a different plane but still hold pride in what they are.

+5 to [Vitality]

+5 to [Strength]

+5 to [Endurance]

+5 to [Wisdom]

+5 to [Agility]

[Serguthy Balruq]

A [Serguthy Balruq] is a [Balruq] that commands mastery over flames. Nothing can stop their fury once enraged. They will incinerate everything, leaving less than ashes in their wake.

+15 to [Wisdom]

+5 to [Endurance]

+5 to [Agility]

[Fiendish Duke of Belial]

A [Fiendish Duke of Belial] is a [Fiend] that commands pride and respect from their minions. They show power through strength, paying kindness to their allies tenfold, while repaying cruelty to their enemies a hundredfold.

+15 to [Strength]

+8 to [Vitality]

+2 to [Endurance]

Bonus: 50% of [Wisdom] is permanently removed and added to [Endurance].

[Lamael Succubus]

A [Lamael Succubus] is a fiery [Succubus] that emphasizes passion over wit. Their fire magic blazes like an inferno, burning their problems into ashes as they see fit. Their control over their biology is less than a [Succubus].

+10 to [Wisdom]

+5 to [Endurance]

+5 to [Vitality]

+3 to [Strength]

I paused, getting up from the bloodied corpse at my feet. I considered all the options, cocking my head.

“Huh, well that’s an obvious choice.”

Evolution Complete!

[Greater Demon] -> [Greater Demon of Pride]

Subspecies [Midday Changeling] -> [Asura Changeling]

Gained 20 Stat Points!

[Vitality] +5

[Strength] +5

[Endurance] +5

[Wisdom] +5

[Agility] +5

Gained 2 Skill Slots!

Gained 6 Skill Points!

General Skill [Lesser Enhanced Wisdom] Obtained!

Skill [Charge of Embers] becomes [Flame Burst]!

Skill [Fire Strike] becomes [Barrage of Cinders]!

Skill [Ignition] becomes [Ember Core]!

Skill [Passive - Deadly Instincts] becomes [Passive - A Hunter’s Sense]!

Skill [Flaming Breath] is now available.

Skill [Horror’s Flare] is now available.

Skill [Intimidation] is now available.

Skill [Radiant Slash] is now available.

Skill [Passive - Keen Eye] is now available.

Skill [Passive - Refined Casting] is now available.


Author's Note:

I have had this scene planned since I started writing Salvos. However, I had two different scenarios in my head, not sure of which I'd rather go with. The scenario you've read is the one I finally decided to go with just yesterday. The second scenario is a little bit different. 

Darker. 

Instead of Salvos saving Edithe in time, she arrives just in time to find Edithe bleeding out. Her companion dies in her arms, and Salvos is filled with rage. Same thing happens as she kills Stephen and his assassins. But instead of becoming a [Greater Demon of Pride], she becomes a [Greater Demon of Wrath]. 

Thinking about it now, that wasn't really the best choice and I'm glad I went this route. The entirety of Salvos' story is about finding herself. Learning more about herself. Adapting to her surroundings. Evolving, if you will. 

Her becoming a [Greater Demon of Wrath] would be cool, but wouldn't really fit the theme of the story I've established so far. It's about Salvos. And it's a monster evolution litrpg. 

She is not just going to become a Human, she is still a Demon at the end of the day. In the Netherworld, being a Demon was not some distinct part of her identity; it was just what she was, like everyone else, and she didn't care for it. But in the Mortal Realm, it is a part of her. It affects her everyday life. The way others perceive her. And by extension, the way she perceives herself.

There is one more chapter in Volume 2. I probably should have saved the evolution for that chapter. But I decided to just keep it in this chapter for now. The Skills she gained and the namess for it are all subject to change. Especially [Asura Changeling]. I was thinking of making it [Asura Changeling of Day] or [Asura's Day Changeling], but it felt like too much of a mouthful.

If anyone has any ideas, do let me know! I'd appreciate you forever for helping me with names which I absolutely suck with.


Comments

CryoHydra357

Nice! Does she have 6 arms like a normal Asura? What does her mortal form look like?

Linkneo5

I like this version best too

MelasD

What her Mortal Form looks like depends on what she wants it to be. If she wants it to be a Human, she’ll look exactly the same as before ;)

Anonymous

Pride works better she's always been proud of who she is and what she learns. Wrath is cool but it would be kinda a turn from typical Salvos

BlackFire13th

Question: would the other evolution options have taken the the mortal form skill away? If not I’d figure the balruq or fiendish duke to be the better choice.

Cirex123

Pride and prejudice, huh

MelasD

They would have, yep! It would’ve been replaced with their own Racial Skills. For Balruq (Balrog lol but copyright) she would’ve had a Berserker type Racial Skill.

Anonymous

Great chapter! For fun I'll take a shot at a few names. How about... dusk changeling, sunset changeling, or twilight changeling. Looking forward to the next chapter, cheers!

Simon Casey

Thanks for the chapter, this is great! I really got a feel for the desperation Stephen had as he was getting chased down by Salvos.

lKutts

The day and night thing is a figure of speech or does that mean she can only be a human changeling during the day?

riseris

Well as I expected, Stephen was pretty much all talk and bluster. His never doing anything beyond telling others what to do and make snide remarks and threats without getting his own hands dirty made me think he was probably way weaker than his attitude suggested. Anyway I think I realized that a major part of my annoyance with this war arc beyond a lot of the rules and such not making sense, is like what Salvos said in this chapter. This was all about Edithe and her companions, not Salvos. There really wasn’t much of a connection or reason to care about these people beyond the story focusing on them. Maybe it would have been better if we had more time or connection with them beyond that or a reason to think of all of them as something other than just hanger ons of the plot. As it stands now, this war arc feels like it could have been cut and just replaced with Stephen himself taking personal revenge through someway and ultimately nothing would have changed for the story narrative as it stands now.

JAZZEYENANO

So does this mean she can’t be a demon during the day and can only change forms at night?

Simon Casey

She could stay changed 24/7 before when she was a “midday” changeling, so presumably losing the time of day qualifier won’t change that.

Overmind_Slab

I expected Salvos to hold off on evolving to wait for something better but I guess we only know that works for classes.

Anonymous

I personally enjoyed the Edithe parts better. And With all the death. I didn't know if Edithe was going to live or not. Honestly, if the impression i got wasn't "They aren't technically breaking the rules so it is ok". And instead was "They are going to kill us all before anyone can do anything about it and then spin whatever story they want" or something like that. Then i would have no problem with the arc at all.

Yeno Memevig

The description of Asura Changeling described Salvos pretty accurately. Don't think any other evolutions would've came close.

KamikazePotato

Keep the evolution in this update. It ties thematically with her reinforcement of her own self-identity.

Anonymous

I'm glad you didn't kill off edith, as a character she has already gone through quite a bit of tragedy. It would seem a bit too much to kill her off now, when she seems to have just started putting her life back together.

Yeno Memevig

[Midday Changeling of Asura] ?

LapisLazuli

Great chapter! I've even read it several times through the day. I have a question - will there be a more advanced version of weapon mastery?

ShotoGun

The iron champions company is full of asshole fantasy thugs. Like an echo chamber of D&D murder hobos.

Anonymous

Now I can't wait for more

Anonymous

Thanks can't wait for more

Venalitor

Stephen going down like a punk after all his plotting suprised me quite a bit. Maybe it shouldn't have, but his party member was diamond leveled, so I had been thinking his stagnant status as platinum was more of a ruse than him being relatively weak. His confidence unravelling was pretty fun though, even if the fight seemed a bit easy. This arc was good for fleshing out Edithe. She was able to overcome her fear, after being faced with it again after Paige's death, when she saved Cless while evacuating Rachel and we got to she where she came from in the Valiant Dreamers. the Dreamers also got a fairly thorough introduction, though I barely had names straight before characters started dying, so emotional respose to that was limited. I am very glad Edithe didn't die too because that would have rendered the arc largely meaningless. Ooh, yes! Edithe's stand is the climax, so Salvos' own rescue and Stephen's death is humorous post-climax wrap-up rather than an anti-climax. That does sort of bring the expectation of Edithe returning to a more main-line role, at least for a time. Dunno how that's going to work out with her relatively slow leveling. Or maybe she'll party up with Sophia and Cless and have the occasional influence on the story. Regarding the Iron Champions toeing the line vs sounding like they were avoiding repercussions entirely it would have been nice to get a scene from their perspective stressing over their fail conditions. Maybe their actions as they performed them warranted other parties to deliberate or wait for something more directly damning to take action, so the Champions would only have a few days to end the war rather than the weeks it sounded like it would take partly due to the term 'war' making it sound like a drawn out affair. Could also have been good if their actions were a bit more discreet. Maybe the Champions thought if they finished the conflict swiftly enough they would have been able to prepare for any repercussions and maybe relegate such repercussion to simple enmity with other factions rather than further open conflict. Direct intervention by other parties could also have been written out like it was with Lucerna. Whatever was keeping them busy during that incident might not be over.

Katherine

>That does sort of bring the expectation of Edithe returning to a more main-line role, at least for a time. Dunno how that's going to work out with her relatively slow leveling. Or maybe she'll party up with Sophia and Cless and have the occasional influence on the story. While she levels up slowly, her versatility is much higher than average. As she has shown during this arc, she can fight with the better of them as long as she's not isolated, alone, and agenst a much higher leveled threat. So, it's an exchange. Slower leveling but incredibly helpful. With Salvos to defend her Many weaknesses dry up. I'd say though the second could be interesting too. Depends on the author.

J

"Dozens of sharp teeth revealed {itself}" - "themselves" "But as he blinked {and} out of existence" - Think you just need to remove "and" here, unless you had intended other things with this sentence as well.

Indream

I like this version. Wrath dont feel like Salvos. Despite little rant couple chapters before, i like the ending. As for race name maybe Midday Asura? While it keep connection to midday changeling, it's like next step. Since Asura changeling feel like just another variation of changeling.

Gardor

"The time and resources we spent here are wasted" bro you snuck into a temple to kill a girl for spite, whats your profit