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Onto the regularly scheduled chapter!

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“Why are we here?” Decimus unhappily threw another branch into the fire. The fire didn’t need the extra fuel, but Decimus was bored out of his mind.

Livia arched an eyebrow, the two Rangers on nightwatch.

“Because we think the idiots calling themselves the Circus of Smiles went this way?” She answered.

“No, no, I get that. I mean, why are we camping here? We’re not exactly stealthy, and Palma is just a few miles away. Why camp?”

Livia didn’t say anything for a minute or two, adding another log to the fire while she waited.

“I figure because it’s harder.” She finally answered.

“Yeah, but why make it harder? We’ve proven we’re the toughest. We’re the best. Why camp, instead of staying in a tavern? I know it’s deliberate we’re out here, I just can’t wrap my head around it.” Decimus said.

Livia was quiet for a minute, organizing her thoughts.

“Have you heard of the pendulum theory?” She asked.

“Pendulum theory? Can’t say I have.” Decimus answered. “Is the blasted pendulum why we’re here?”

Livia nodded.

“Yeah, pendulum theory. It only applies on the largest of scales. Countries and decades. It’s somewhat controversial, not everyone agrees. Alright, think of this. You’ve got two cities fighting each other. Everyone levels, yeah?” Livia said.

“Yeah.” Decimus said.

“What happens when someone starts winning?” She asked.

Decimus shrugged.

“Easy. They win.

Livia shook her head, then nodded.

“Well, yes. If they win, they win, it’s over. Burn their fields, salt their cities, destroy their monuments. Simple. Pendulum theory applies more when one side doesn’t manage to immediately win. My scale might be off. Here’s how I see it, on a grand scale. Two cities - no, two countries - fight each other. One starts winning, and winning hard. Issue is, as they’re winning, fewer of the soldiers are getting into scraps and fights. They’re on guard duty. Logistics duty. They’re not getting in fights anymore. The pendulum’s swung towards one side. There’s also the question of committing elite troops, and regulars. If they’re winning hard, it’s easy, and there are fewer levels to be had after the initial push. On the other side of things, the second country is losing, and losing badly. Everyone is in every fight, and the odds are impossible. What does that do for your level, fighting every day against impossible, overwhelming odds?”

Decimus grunted.

“Levels. Levels like crazy, for everyone.”

Livia nodded.

“Exactly. Unless the first country can quickly overwhelm and thoroughly exterminate the opposition, the opposition’s going to get real strong, real fast. In the meantime, the first country’s going to be going soft. The losing country is making elites, and the winning one’s focused on getting rich. Eventually, things will shift and change enough that the pendulum swings back the other way. The people who almost lost are now the powerful ones, and the first country is filled with soft targets.”

Decimus chewed over that for a minute.

“We’re the first country.” He concluded. “We’ve won too much.”

Livia nodded.

“Aye, that we have. I think the government knows it, the vampires aren’t stupid. Why is there still wilderness? Why are great forests and deep caves allowed to stand? Why don’t we raze them all to the ground, and tame the wilds once and for all? Same reason Sentinels have a minimal threshold before they’ll step in. You think Arachne couldn’t find the Circus of Smiles, kill them all, and be back before lunch? They don’t get any experience for crushing a level 500 threat, while we’ll all get a few levels for it. No monsters? No levels. No levels? No elites. No next generation. We’d be a sitting target for even a mortal country to invade. Can’t ruin the source of experience, even if it costs a few lives from the occasional attack.”

Decimus immediately made another connection.

“That stupid imposter Sentinel mission. I thought it was something of a set up. A single aged letter sent years ago, for a single person who said it once, in one of the hardest targets in the world that’s conveniently accessible, and who just so happens to be on a trip when we get there!?” Decimus was working himself up the whole time. “I get ‘impossible challenge for levels’ but come on! That was absurd!”

Livia shook her head.

“For what it’s worth, I believe that was a real mission. Fake missions just aren’t worth it. But that mission does illustrate my point nicely. How peaceful are things that the Roaming Ranger Team can be deployed on something so petty? How good are things that we can fail a mission and it doesn’t matter? How many times have we leveled recently? How many missions have we gone on this year? Not enough. Things are too peaceful, too quiet, too easy. Which is why we’re here, in the forest, and not in a tavern.”

Decimus sighed.

“Levels.”

“Levels.” Livia agreed. “Makes it easier knowing why?”

Decimus nodded.

“Yup. Just gotta find the biggest, baddest thing in here, fight it, level, then we can sleep in a tavern.”

Livia laughed at his unrepentant grin, and threw another stick into the fire.

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Viria readjusted the jug on her shoulder, cursing her ancestors once again for building their house so far away from the main well. Water jar readjusted, she continued to limp into the village.

The walk wouldn’t be so bad if she hadn’t twisted her knee running around when she was a teenager. The one moment of fun, running through a field, ruined her whole life when she rolled her ankle on a rock, fell badly, and wrenched her knee.

The local [Witch] was good for cuts, scrapes, potions, midwifery, setting broken bones and hundreds of other little tasks, but something as large as Viria’s knee injury had been too much for her. She’d tried to set it and fix it, but it never set right.

The jug started to slip from her grip, and Viria paused to readjust it. Putting it down would mean picking it back up again, and that was worse than pausing a moment.

“Need a hand?” Rusticus asked Viria, the man bounding up with a grin.

Viria frowned at him. She didn’t think he was being entirely altruistic.

“No.” She curtly refused him, continuing to limp along. Rusticus didn’t take the hint, walking literal circles around Viria, as if showing off how well he could walk would endear him to her.

“Awww, come on, don’t be like that. Here, let me-”

Rusticus was in the middle of trying to grab Viria’s jug off her shoulder when he froze, staring off into the woods behind her.

“This isn’t funny.” He curtly jabbed at Viria. “Knock it off.”

Viria had no idea what he was talking about. She carefully twisted her head around, making sure not to put any more weight or stress on her bad knee.

Her water jug slipped from her hands, shattering on the dirt road.

Viria had never seen one before, but she’d grown up on stories of them.

Everyone had.

“PEKARI!” She screamed at the sight of the mottled green-brown elvenoid golems. She started limp-running as fast as she could towards her home, water forgotten. She knew there was no chance at outrunning them, not with her knee, and that hiding was the only chance she had.

Rusticus roared with anger. No stupid metal construct without a level was going to invade his village, not while he drew breath. He was level 140. The golems were level 0. He picked up the closest weapon he could find - the handle of Viria’s broken jug - and charged the marching Pekari soldiers.

The cry of alarm had been picked up by the rest of the village, and people were running, hiding, or fighting, no real organization present. The majority tried to scatter into the woods, hoping to evade the tightening cordon. A father tossed his kid high up into a tree, a safe hiding spot - so long as the Pekari didn’t look up. The local [Brewer] hustled through his kegs, smashing the plug out of one deep in his stocks. He hauled himself up and into the barrel, knowing that Pekari never came for goods - only people.

The golem’s arms blurred as it thrust its spear through Rusticus’s chest, mechanically and efficiently killing him. The line of Pekari didn’t even pause as they killed Rusticus, the constructs marching over his fallen body, stomping him into the ground. A second golem took aim at the fleeing Viria, and with a soft cough, fired a metal slug at the fleeing woman.

Viria screamed as she fell, clutching the stump of her leg as the magically propelled slug ripped through her bad knee. The force of it ripped half the limb off, and she hit the ground hard, bleeding into the dirt.

They won’t take me. Viria swore to herself through the blinding pain. They’ll never take me.

Adrenaline warred with pain and won, and Viria turned over onto her belly. She started crawling towards a wood pile, hoping against hope that she could bury herself in it, and the automatons would pass her by. One arm in front of the other, she half-crawled, half-dragged herself to the pile as screams of fear, panic, pain, and loss erupted all around her as the Pekari mercilessly mowed down any resisting villagers, and crippled anyone who tried to run. Her destroyed leg spurted blood onto the dirt, mixing to make a disgusting mud, and a trail even a toddler could follow.

The Pekari weren’t known for the ability to follow any trail.

Viria was three arm-pulls away from the pile when a cold foot mercilessly stepped on her hand. She screamed as the weight broke her hand, and her screaming took another note as a hot brand pressed against her bleeding leg.

She passed out from the pain, and the Pekari grabbed her leg. Uncaring of any damage it might do, the construct turned around, and started to drag her back to their lair.

Along with the rest of the villagers.

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Ebbot coughed and knuckled his forehead.

I didn’t even drink all that much last night! He silently complained as he rolled with the swaying of the ship’s deck. Captain Gil must’ve bought the cheap stuff. Again.

He squinted up at the sun, dunking his mop in his bucket and slapping it down onto the ship’s deck.

Bad food. Bad pay. Bad cargo. Bad port. Why am I here again?

Ebbot cursed all his prior life choices that led him here, to Captain Gil’s ship. When he’d signed up to be a [Sailor] he imagined a daring life on the high seas, transporting valuable cargos - spices, gems, magical woods and more - all around the world. He’d be with a crew of competent sailors, working by day, drinking by night, and ripping through the port town brothels and bars like wildfire when he had a chance.

Only the last one had even a shadow of coming to pass. Instead of gems and gold, they were transporting grain, and from how well-sealed the ship was combined with the smell that wafted out whenever Ebbot got too close, he doubted anyone would buy it. It’d put the captain in a worse mood, their pay would go down, far below the promised rates - and it wasn’t like Ebbot had anyone he could complain to about that, ships and crews were notoriously difficult to enforce the law on - the [First Mate] was a bad-tempered brute who looked for any excuse to beat Ebbot - if one of the other [Deckhands] hadn’t sparked his ire already - and the entire ship was cheap. Bad lines, repaired and returned to service that looked like a stiff breeze would snap, rotting timbers that were ‘good enough’ and ‘too expensive to replace’, and now even the grog was bad.

That’s it. Ebbot swore to himself. Last trip. I’m getting off at the next port, and finding a different ship - any ship - to sign onto. Don’t care if it’s a slaving ship, it’s got to be better than this. Just two more days until port.

A port found in the storm that was his life, Ebbot got to mopping with renewed vigor.

“Squeak?”

Ebbot turned at the noise, and threw his mop down in disgust.

“Rats! Now we have rats!” He complained to the sky. His complaint was cut short by a short, vicious cough.

[Sailor] Ebbot!” The [First Mate] roared at him, and Ebbot jumped. Between his hangover and his own reflections, he hadn’t seen the ugly gorgon sneaking up on him.

Ebbot snapped to attention.

If he showed proper deference now, he might reduce the lashing he got.

“Sir!” He called out properly, his head swimming in pain.

As the [First Mate] got in his face and roared at him, all Ebbot could see was the rat fleeing back into the depths of the ship.

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Arachne was well named. It was natural that the name fit like a spider silk weave dress, given that it was bestowed upon her rise to Sentinel.

She was, among other things, a [Thinker], her mind expanded and improved dozens of times over by skills and classes. The tiny threads she wove through the entire city sent tiny vibrations to where she sat in her lair, like a spider who’d woven a city-wide net.

She heard everything that happened in Sangino.

She felt every footprint, every movement, every vibration.

She knew all.


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AN2: Pendulum theory is simply one school of thought on Pallos. There's evidence for it (See: Valkyries vs goblins, the remaining Valkyries are all powerhouses), and there's evidence against it. I wanted to highlight this particular situation and school of thinking as an aside for what the Rangers had been up to.

Book 10 cover is coming along nicely. 

Comments

ARealPerson

All the ants where the same level so this would be a slightly different situation

Anonymous

I pre ordered and it was the right book for me. So there may be no issue after all

Isaac Allen

You know the the Rangers showing it up at the school was mentioned in a sort of offhand way if I remember right there was something mentioned about being accosted by armed mercenaries. Oh no the Ranger team coming to kidnap Elaine was basically a chekov's gun set up.

a passing Fnord

So is the part with Arachne because she will interact with Elaine very soon when gets to the city Arachne is in as the first major city Elaine and Iona stop in in Extererri? Or a more long term setup, or just a reference to Arachne Tellwyrn?

a passing Fnord

Also can't wait for Wednesday's chapter.

Anonymous

I guess it's set up because Elaine and gang will *randomly* come across the village set upon by the Murdergolems. Which will cause Arachne to know that someone unknown is fixing stuff that rangers are supposed to deal with. Effectively *stealing* levels from Exterris precious rangers.

Anonymous

But is Exterris not the empire that Night made from the rest of the first empire we followed? Then Eliane is technically just doing her job as sentinel as she is not released of duty and it seems Night just took over what was left of the former empire so she is still employed, can't say she has been active so no pay though

M van Dongen

Boooo chapter was already released in the full book...

sqeesqad

Well, that was confusing. Does anyone understand what happened or what the point of this interlude was?

Drumic

First part seems to be the people from vampire country that were sent to capture MC for 'impersonating' a sentinel (i think), shows that they are curreently off on another mission. The other parts I would guess are events and people that our MC group may meet/interact with when trying to travel to vampire country.

Cirvante

@Selkie "Well, yes. If they win, they win, it’s over. Burn their fields, salt their cities," <- Should be the other way around, burn their cities and salt their fields. You can burn fields of course, but salt will do very little against cities. Also, with competent Healers now being a thing, powerleveling combat classers should be pretty easy. Elaine did it with her Ranger team eventually, allowing them to go harder during sparring. Combine it with [Teaching] skills for the instructors, as well as [Learning] and [Training] skills for the trainees, and you can squeeze a lot of levels out of some brutal sparring lessons. Killing monsters would still be necessary for achievements and better classes, but leveling itself can be greatly enhanced.

Anonymous

Efficient healers stills take a decade of training before becoming efficient, and more importantly, very few will go the combat healer route, that hasn't changed since Remus, it's a scholar path and a pacifist path. The better ones will have some variation of Elaine's Oath, and will therefore never willingly go to an active battlefield, she is the exception of exceptions.

Tjark

@a passing Fnord It quite clearly says Arachne knows everything that happens in Sangino which is the capital city of Exterreri and was mentioned as Elaine's destination where she aims to settle down with Iona before beginning to travel again. @Ant1h3ld I don't see any info on Arachne being capable of seeing all the way out to some middle of nowhere village. Though yes, Elaine+ will likely come acro ss that village just as they will the likely plague created by the rats in the crops on the ship. @Christian Gaarddahl Korsbæk Yes, Exterreri descended directly from Remus and took over the concept of rangers, Sentinels and likely other things too. But they're very clearly not the same nation. Elaine was never a position as Sentinel of Exterreri, so she isn't one. It's a complicated situation and she might very well just be hired by them once they know about her, but the way you're describing the situation is more or less just taking a few facts and twisting the unknowns however you like it.

Tjark

Yeah. The kidnapped village is more an Iona thing of rescuing and protecting the villagers from the golems, while the ship will likely produce a plague that Elaine will come across. Arachne is just foreshadowing some things for when they arrive in Sangino. Could go a lot of different ways depending on what Elaine does and what she says. It just told us that Arachne will be able to hear her in the city.

Anonymous

Is it just me or do the chapters feel shorter these past few weeks. I might be wrong but I'm not sure. I could just be getting quicker at Reading.

Shoto

exactly, battle healers are rare, the most you can find is military healers, but those would be those who have some military training as a soldier, but who stay behind the front line, receiving wounded soldiers and sending them back to fight, instead of Unlike Elaine who steps in the middle of the fight to heal people. And even though medical knowledge has improved, pursuing that knowledge is still difficult, you won't get a medical school in small towns, and even if you do, it costs a lot of money, it's not something a villager in a small town can get, and leveling healer classes at low levels still sucks.

Markus

Even if you perfect the training and have the best healers, the best facilities and the best teachers. It would not be enough. At class upp your available classes rank mainly depend on achievements. Remember the class Elaine got because she lit a Phoenix on fire? You could never get that in a school.

Anonymous

I think you are underestimating how hard Selkie went after that UTC-0 update. Odds are the file was replaced before you pulled it.

Scott, just Scott

Salt their cities is how the Romans described it according to google. I was also surprised by the phrase.

SelkieMyth

I'll have to check wordcounts. I have a comfortable 2-4k range that I usually aim for, and look for a solid stopping point once I'm around 3k generally. Some chapters, like the interlude, like introducing Artemis, like Demos dying, are much shorter because they do what they need to do. Then, occasionally, I write megachonkers, like the Fae chapter, like the Night interlude. My stats suggest my average chapter length is 3.2k words

Olly

I wonder: how much does Pendulum Theory apply to the Formorian War? There, Remus was on the back foot playing defense against the Formorians. If the line truly and completely broke and Formorians swept through unhindered, it would have been basically the end for Remus. This state continued for at least decades, maybe even centuries, I can't recall. How much did that contribute to the general strength of the army, and the power of elite Sentinels? I recall most soldiers plateaued around 180, but that plateau was not getting higher as the war went on. Elaine was sent to the front lines a few times to level her healing and combat classes to get her up closer to Sentinel levels, but other methods of powerleveling such as the coliseum may have been used if the Formorians were not such a threat. I guess what it comes down to is: in the absence of a Formorian Threat, what resources would have been available to Remus for leveling in their absence? If the shoe had been on the other foot, with the Formorian Queens desperately holding back the Remus army, or if the dwarves had pushed into the Dead Zone to exterminate the Formorians, would they have leveled sufficiently to turn the tide and strike a decisive blow the same way Remus eventually did? In a discussion of countries and centuries, I'm not sure I can give a confident answer.

NethanielShade

Setup chapters are necessary things, but I always get disappointed when they come around. I’m not complaining about it. I’m just eager to get to the good stuff!

Jeanean

But, you are forgetting the fact that BOTH sides of the Pendulum, in theory, can apply the same brutal sparring sessions. And from there, its once again a case of one side having a lot of Soldiers with little real experience, while the other has a, much smaller, army of experienced veterans. In the real world, Quantity trumps (almost) all, because experience is a linear power multiplier with a very low-set hard limit. But in BTDEM, experience and Experience, are exponential multipliers, with a "limit" so high that it doesn't matter in a war. Even if the Pendulum effect on pure levels can be negated, it still applies to achievemnts. There was actually a very good example of that back when Elaine first met the dwarves. The group that was supposed to escort her was, iirc, almost twice her level. But, that was a result of leveling through sparring, a naturally longer than human lifespan, and not living in the experience-poor zone. Despite being twice Elaines level, she was stronger than any of them.

Ano Ano

Looking forward to the end of the next book where someone thinks about how sad it was that Arachne died off screen a few weeks before.

Tiffany Miller

Was kinda hoping for a Roland response to all events part.

Cirvante

I wasn't talking about combat healers, just normal healers who oversee sparring sessions. We know that more brutal and realistic sparring, where everything short of killing blows is allowed, gives far better experience. Without a Healer who has a good [Restoration] skill that's not really an option, but the Exterreri Ranger Academy could easily keep a few oath-bound Healers on their payroll. Maybe even recruit them in mortal lands and offer them protection to class up and seize immortality in the Empire. With the right setup of skills and healers, they could powerlevel their recruits quite effectively. Brutal sparring is also more realistic than soft sparring and hitting training dummies and should give better class quality as well. The wilds and depths could then be used to get the recruits additional achievements for their class ups. Is it as effective as throwing classers into an actual meatgrinder? Nope. But between [Training] skills and level 800+ immortal vampire instructors with high-level [Teaching] skills, you could squeeze a lot of levels out of sparring. The real problem would be to keep the trainees from developing bad habits. Like fighting too recklessly because there's always a healer on standby, or not being able to go for killing blows. If I was in charge of the Ranger Academy, I'd train up an [Arena Master], probably Mirage/Brilliance/Mirror, to create a magical holodeck. In there, trainees could be put through all kinds of different scenarios, go for killing blows and learn to use their skills in the most effective and efficient manner. The [Arena Master] could also take specialized [Teaching] skills that only work for his simulations. This, combined with the sheer novelty of the combat scenarios, should give some decent levels as well. Eventually, you could turn him into a vampire before he succumbs to old age. Good training facilities like that can allow you to train elite classers even during peace times. Granted, if your enemies have the same training facilities, it would level the playing field and the pendulum would swing again.

Cirvante

When the frontline was broken, soldiers started leveling faster from the increased danger. Elaine mentioned this as she used [Identify] on the surviving veterans. If the Formorian Queens had started losing, they would have leveled faster as well. By the time Toxic killed the first queen and the others started their all-out offense, their levels were already so high from centuries of fighting that the increased experience made no real difference in the short duration of the war. The frontline leveling gave Remus a steady supply of potential Ranger trainees. It did little for their Sentinels, as those were recruited from the pool of active veteran Rangers and leveled primarily from Sentinel missions. Except for Magic, who leveled from playing with the trainees, and Acquisition, who leveled from borrowing stuff. Dawn got a lot of Healer levels from healing at the frontline though.

enderman

Probably just angry noble parents yelling at there kids.