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Animation Preview - AML4 Intro - Rough Draft (Patreon)

Published:
2018-08-31 22:46:39
Imported:
2020-07

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Heya all. Here is a little preview of the AML4 Intro. I spent the past few days working on updating a lot of things about Bella. I should have all the characters updated by the end of the weekend so that I can start on the main animation =)

Direct Link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/7tt39f1o2o4u01e/AML4IntroDraft.mp4?dl=0

For new Patreons, just as an FYI, I should be posting previews several times a week with progress updates as well starting next week. Most animation previews (at least for the first couple weeks) will be LOW quality "play blast" previews.

And as always, if you see something that doesnt look right/good OR you have an idea how to improve a section, please feel free to share. I cant stress how important it is for me to have your feedback.

I changed around the intro because I kind of like this idea of showing off Mary's body. She isnt really animated yet but I just want to give you an idea of what I am going for. She won't do much other than give a little sigh and take a couple of breaths.

Also, as a side note, this is the first "AML" intro that does not feature Maggie.

Let me know your thoughts!

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Comments

UltimateKisame

Pretty good, I got the idea. However, the same would be more erotic if I had some semen on the tip dripping. I think it could be more erotic

UltimateKisame
>>15127814

try it and if it convinces you you can add it if you see that it is better without anything, do not add it.

bigwiggy

You hit this one out of the park Red as Mary looks so beautiful, and those balls...simply spectacular. And I'd say definitely have her l leaking some seamen.

Futanari Fan

Looking very good, and with the sigh and breaths I guess she is sad that she is not aroused so not sure about the pre cum. Interesting possibility of hearing what she is thinking to make her so sad.

Ciarán M

Wow, this pose that Mary is laying in, with how we view her as the camera flys over her are simply marvellous! I love everything about it, from the foreshortening of her body, with the rounded and voluptuous shape of her bum, her balls protruding from between her thighs, long cock hanging out on the other side as the foreskin wraps over the tip, while her large breasts hang down and squish as they contact each other 😍😍😍😍😍. At the same time though, the sombre music, her saddened expression and the way she's laying there, presumable with her back turned to Maggie and Bella, resting on her hand really give off that melancholic tone. It all makes me really want to see Mary get cheered up and smiling again 😄, among other things 😉.

Futanari Fan

As always Ciaran, you are a devil for describing the detail. Just imagine Bella and Maggie caressing her balls and pussy at the same time. I think that should cheer her up!

Ciarán M
>>15141396

Thank you very much 😄. Oh god, that imagery! Have Mary sitting there, leaning back with Maggie and Bella on their knees before her, fingers cradling her balls and clit, Mary moans in pleasure as her cock rises all on it's own, foreskin peeling back and precum oozing out. Perhaps even have Maggie and/or Bella start to lick it from tip 😍😍😍. Speaking of precum, I see that the question is raised about whether or not to add it to Mary as she lays here in this preview. I can understand that if she's supposed to be sad and not feeling entirely horny anymore, that it doesn't make sense for it to be there. However, it could also be argued that precum would make sense as it would have oozed out during AML3, further showing Mary's disappointment as she didn't get to fully cum like both Maggie and Bella did. I'm curious as to what you think about that latter idea in regards to the precum.

Futanari Fan
>>15141396

I like the idea of fingers working on her balls and clit; especially just tugging very gently on her clit; just thumb and forefinger with the little finger curled as in the polite way to drink a cup of tea. A sequence of little tugs each accompanied by progressively more ecstatic moaning and of course some inner thoughts “Oh god I hope she doesn’t stop, but not too quickly, soooo nice but I want it to last”. Pre cum is an interesting debate both yes and no have points in their favour but if we go for yes then it should be minimal and as the encounter ensues more could flow.

Ciarán M
>>15141396

Oh I like everything about what you just described 😍, perhaps as Mary gets more excited, you have that moment where the camera zooms on her face and we have a sudden "OH!" from her as she throws her head back in ecstasy, the camera cutting back down to below to show that some fingers have just gone inside her pussy, sparking that sudden reaction 😉. Maybe even have Maggie and Bella, giggling to each other over how excited they're making Mary. As for the precum, I agree with you here, in this instance it should only be minimal, like a slight wet glisten on the tip of Mary's cock, to show the fun that she was having, but not right now.

Futanari Fan

Oh I do enjoy these conversations Ciaran. And Maggie and Bella giggling to each other could be the start of their mutual attraction. As Mary gets more aroused some of their attention might go towards arousing each other after all they do have two hands each so one for Mary and one for each other.

Ciarán M
>>15142462

As do I, this is great fun 😄. And that's exactly it, their mutual enjoyment of pleasing Mary and the fun that they're having could absolutely lead to them overcoming that former rivalry. I love that idea that you have here, you could have Mary sitting back, one of each of Maggie and Bella's hands caressing and fondling her, while each of them start to stroke the other's cock, we could see them start to look more at each other, locking eyes and perhaps even leaning in to kiss passionately, the precum dripping out now in greater quantities with all of the lust and excitement 😍😍😍.

Futanari Fan
>>15142462

And of course Mary would find this both a huge turn on and an annoyance; inner voice, “How come they are fondling each other? All their attention should be on me! But OMG how sexy they both look. I really want to suck on those little cocks and taste their pre-cum. Oh I’m going to cum…”

Ciarán M
>>15142462

Oh that inner monologue is great, I like the conflict between being jealous of the two of them while also being so aroused too. And that is something that I definitely want to see, one of the characters suckling on and licking the tip of one of the precumming cocks, exclaiming about how good it tastes. And I just right now thought of something that could be fun, to have Mary and one of the others 69ing, while the 3rd girl sucks and nibbles on Mary's engorged clit, maybe sliding a finger into her butt too 😻

Futanari Fan
>>15142462

Oh that does sound good but an alternative might be for Maggie and Bella to be 69ing leaving Mary looking on aghast and enraptured (all sorts of conflicting inner voice here) with nothing to do but pump her cock and cum over the both of them.

Ciarán M
>>15142462

I like that idea a lot too, especially if it was the case that given just how horny Mary is, she shoots out even more cum than she usually would, drenching the two of them in it 😋. But before that, perhaps while Mary is stroking herself, she could be walking around Maggie and Bella while they're in 69, caressing them, trailing her fingers over their bodies, play with their pussies, with all 3 of them growing in excitement, Maggie and Bella's moans growing louder each time Mary touches them.

Futanari Fan
>>15142462

Maggie and Bella bathed in cum sounds really good but your prequel is really exciting. What a ménage a trios this is turning out to be. There are so many possibilities as the affections between the individuals in the trio wax and wane and they discover new ways of exciting and admonishing one another. Can’t wait to see what Agent Red’s next preview gives rise to in our erotic creativity.

Ciarán M
>>15142462

Glad you like that idea, it's one that I'm pretty proud of 😂. And yes indeed, 3 ladies all with so many pleasure points to play with, there certainly is much that can be done there with different characters taking charge, becoming active or passive participants at different points. Personally, I would love to see a scene where Mary is entirely passive. Just imagine Mary on her back, her legs spread wide as Bella fucks her, maybe periodically swapping between her ass and pussy, all while Maggie sucks Mary's cock. In this scenario, Mary isn't touching herself at all, she's just laying back, gripped with pleasure as Maggie and Bella take control, culminating with Mary's cock erupting with cum, a fully free hand ejaculation, her moans growing into a loud, orgasmic crescendo. I have to say, that that scenario is my ultimate fantasy when it comes to these 3 😍😍😍. But I'm getting ahead of myself 😅, like you said, we have to wait and see what Red provides for us 😄

Futanari Fan
>>15142462

Great ultimate fantasy but I'm sure we can create several and be spoiled for choice! One thing we might contemplate is writing the inner thoughts that accompany the build ups and crescendos.

Ciarán M
>>15142462

Thank you, glad you like it. An addendum, just to add further imagery. As she gets close, Mary could call out "I'm about to cum!", Maggie would pull her head away and Bella would continue to pound into Mary, massive breasts heaving with her thrusts and huge cock pulsing erratically, cum being flung in every direction and soaking all 3 of them. "Quite the mess we've made, it'll take some time to clean up, better get to work now, girls", Mary would say in a sultry, sexy tone as Maggie and Bella eagerly start to lick up all if that delicious cum from each other and Mary 😋😍😍😍. What do you think of that extra bit of detail? Ah yes, I tend to focus a lot on the visual side of things but I do really like the inner monologues, I'll have to consider them more too 😄.

Futanari Fan
>>15142462

What an addendum Ciaran! You really are great at visualising. Licking up that cum what a delightful chore for Maggie and Bella and of course, my addition here, they could dip their fingers and give Mary a taste. I think we are highly complimentary, me on inner dialogue and you on visualisation but as we consider each other’s contributions I’m sure that we’ll learn from each other and together develop some amazing sound and image scenarios.

Ciarán M
>>15142462

Thank you very much, glad you like that idea, it's one that I definitely find exceptionally appealing 😉. Oh and I really like your addition too, Mary suckling their fingers and licking her lips, satisfied with the taste and smiling contentedly as Maggie and Bella continue to clean her up 😋. Goodness, I really do hope that Red reads these and considers them, because I would lose it with joy if we actually got to see this idea play out 😍😍😍😍😍. And I agree completely with you, we've come up with some very arousing scenarios and I enjoy your additions, that suggestion and feeding Mary her own cum is so, so good! I definitely look forward to more of this 😄

Futanari Fan

It would indeed be great if Red used our ideas so here's to further collaboration. I think we will both enjoy the process and the product very much.

Ciarán M
>>15146566

Agreed, so please, pretty please to our dear Agent Red Girl, please consider our ideas 😄😂. But being serious, this collaboration is a lot of fun, bouncing ideas back and forth and seeing them evolve. And yes, as Red unveils more and more previews and updates, it will be great fun seeing them and sharing thoughts and ideas. I certainly know that I can't wait to see more 😍

Futanari Fan
>>15146566

We are so much on the same page Ciaran, really looking forward to our future working on AML and perhaps Amy's Big Wish.

Ciarán M
>>15146566

Indeed, and with a much larger cast for ABW and thus even more personality and body types to become familiar with, I'm sure the fantasies will only grow from there. After all, we're getting a great deal of mileage with Mary, Maggie and Bella alone.

Futanari Fan
>>15146566

I see exponential growth but now I must go and get supper. Let's reconvene when Agent Red has posted her next preview.

AgentRedGirl
>>15146566

I love a lot of the ideas you two post. :) I think you will enjoy the 1st "surprise" in part 4 a LOT!

Futanari Fan
>>15146566

Thank you so much Agent Red It's great to know you read our conversations and that they might inform your work. Definitely looking forward to seeing Part 4!

Ciarán M
>>15146566

Thank you so very much too, Red 😄, it's awesome to know that you read our ideas and consider them for future animations and scenes. And I was already excited for Part 4, but now that has been raised quite a bit more! I'm extremely eager to see part 4 and intrigued by the 1st "Surprise" 😄 (the surprise scene from AML3 made me so happy when I saw it! 😉😍😍😍)