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Emily Lockwood in Knife to the Heart - A Perilous CYOA (5.5) (Patreon)

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2024-03-02 20:05:25
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2024-03-03 09:26:32
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This is a choose your own adventure where you play as frequent damsel in distress Emily Lockwood. In the last choose your own adventure, Riko returned! She's back and she's never been more dangerous. In this adventure she will hunt you to the ends of the earth, trying to defeat and capture you.

She's had years to prepare for this moment, to devise the most humiliating and sensual ways to make you her pet. Eliza will be by your side, and you'll have to keep her safe while evading Riko. But what is Riko planning while she hunts you down? What is her ultimate goal? It's time to find out!

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John Smith

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MarkusJones
>>131265208

Are you sure? I can see the attachment. It's right under where it says 'Open the attachment' There's a paperclip icon next to it, then the file Knife to the Heart.html. You're not seeing that?

Tom Kain

Good chapter, always thought Emily would end up where she now is. Ps. The defeated by a kiss ending has no try again option on it.

MarkusJones
>>131265208

I've just uploaded it as a zip file as well as the html. Can you see either one of those now?

MarkusJones
>>131265208

I've just looked into the issue. Can you please try clicking on the post, that should make the attachments appear. Let me know if this doesnt work.

spyrocyndersam13

So I just finished knife to the heart and what did I think of the story? Well I absoutely loved it although the ending is quite bittersweet and I’m really happy riko is getting a redemption story

Jon Snow

After going through the rabbit hole of this entire series in about a week (seriously this is so good). Ranking the seasons: 1. Season 3 2. Season 5 3. Season 2 4. Season 4 5. Season 1 Haha seriously though. This series is awesome and can’t wait for more shenanigans Emily gets herself into!

MarkusJones
>>131549478

Wow a week! I'm glad you're enjoying the series so far. I love that you ranked the seasons, and I'm glad that the most recent one is so high up! Hopefully season six can get the number one spot.

thelamantin

Genuinely felt let down by the ending. After that toxic relationship with Tommy, it felt great to see Emily happy with Eliza, who was a great character herself. The idea of throwing it all away in order to maintain a status quo was kinda disapointing honestly.

MarkusJones
>>131605115

Ah that's a shame, sorry you didn't like it. I wouldn't call Emily becoming a secret agent the 'status quo' but I understand your disappointment.

thelamantin

By Status Quo i obviously meant Emily snooping around and getting in trouble haha

thelamantin

And season 3 is still my all time favorite haha

Jon Snow
>>131549478

Thanks for the response and I love season 5 cause I am a sucker for riko lol! I hope for her that her redemption story doesn't go too far that she becomes an ally for Emily but more of an anti-hero sort of direction. Kind of like how it was in season 2 when she helped Emily against her brother. Kind of like a "if I can't have her, nobody can" mentality, as it makes sense due to her obsession with Emily and wanting to claim her as her own but also sort of a wildcard in your stories that can be beneficial towards Emily.

Jon Snow
>>131549478

Also after reading the whole series, I did have some critiques I would like to input just as a fan of your writing as I checked almost every possible scenario for the stories. professional grammar - To start a super nitpick one. Mostly just typos and or missed punctuation marks. Nothing horrible of course or unreadable, just when I read anything fictional, I like to immerse myself in the story and a typo can bring me out of it. Again, this one is super minor. Not like there is a typo every page or every other sentence. user friendly UI Not sure if possible on html, my web developing is not sharp lol, but since I am a person who loves to see every outcome, It gets redundant having to have to open a new document of the html and pick the chapter and click and click and click to get to the point where I am at to go to a different route. A more clean and organized UI could fix this, maybe a "home" button on your pages to instantly go back to the chapter menu would be fantastic! Sometimes, I had to have 4 or 5 tabs of the episode so it would be nice. missing links missing "try again" - sometimes, again very minor, there were some missing "try again" links in some of your bed ends. Not a lot, I would assume in your whole series, there were maybe 4 or 5 of them present still. But I had to exit the tab, make a new tab, go to the chapter click away and get back to where I was. Again, minor but just loses the immersion of your story your trying to create. Creative developed endings - I personally of course love the bad endings, however, I would love to them more developed. Of course that means more writing and longer time to make your stories so of course don't think I need it to not read your writings. Some of them, I wish they could be more fleshed out cause some of these endings are really, really good! I was giving a noticeably groan when it would lead up to something good and then I got hit with a "emily adventure ends here" UGH! stale endings - so after reading all of these stories, there were some endings that kind of felt the same to me. I personally am a fan of the hypnosis, mind control bad endings, but most of them were along the lines of "Look into me eyes", "You feel so relaxed" and then emily is taken away. Or she's just picked up, shoulder carried with a butt smack, and then taken away. It can kind of go with developed endings, but the bigger problem is when I am reading this, it felt that I read this ending already three endings ago. felt more like a copy and paste of endings and it makes me sad lol. These are just my inputs! Like I said, this is just my personally opinions! I will read this story regardless cause it is super good! Just wanted to add my takeaways for you that could be of some what value to you in anyway! Thanks again!

Derekhale17755

Great story as always! Emily got that serious moral fibre! I wonder if the next one will be like Deadly Horizons, Emily being kidnapped in various erotic locations. Can we have a scene where Emily is gagged but a potential rescuer is nearby so her female kidnapper puts their hand over her gagged mouth to further muffle her cries? (Maybe whilst her female accomplice is lying to the potential rescuer?) Also have you ever thought about a storyline where Emily is kidnapped by a doppleganger? Then she could be impersonated, used to round up Emily's friends. Could be a good idea if you ever wanted to do a villian pov story like Diaries Form A Killer