Faith, Draft 1, 1_5, outline, CH 24 (Patreon)

Where Thomas’s life at Theta Sigma Gamma takes a turn for the even stranger.

Yeah, with this chapter I’m confident there will have to be changes to the earlier ones. The magic has to be shown to the reader instead of just implied, which will mean breaking one of my rules, since normally I wouldn’t write something the MC doesn’t remember.

As for the changes Ben made they are minor enough, as usual, although there is one I’m not sure I agree with. He put certainty in a discussion I don’t feel belongs there. These events are basically unheard of, so it feels like people would be asking questions instead of making statements. We will see what we can agree on.

So that’s it on the comments, I hope you enjoy the file