Faith, Draft 1, 1 5, outline, CH 12 (Patreon)

Faith in the Family, Commentary, CH 12

Roland’s football game and after game celebration encounters Sigma Thema Gamma situations.

No, no sex in this one, but a lot of implied stuff.

Another difference between me and Ben in our writing I’m noticing. I like to imply a lot of the emotions behind reactions, while he puts them up front. As with many things, neither are write or wrong, although I feel like Ben’s method gives some scene a cartoonish feel to them. depending on how insistent he is on keeping them, the tone of this series could be very different from the Inheriting the Line series.

So that’s it on the comments, I hope you enjoy the file.

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