Faith, Draft 1, 1 5, outline, CH 05 (Patreon)

Faith in the Family, Commentary, CH 5

Where Thomas gets tested to see if he belongs within Sigma Theta Gamma

Here we see that Ben preferred writing first Person PoV, with the Thomas “thinking to himself.” He is much more direct about it then I am. My preferred method if to have a character speak out loud in those situations.

Otherwise the chapter follows the outline cleanly, with a detail added to hint even more strongly as to what’s coming for anyone who has read Inheriting the Line

So that’s it on the comments, I hope you enjoy the file.

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