Faith, Draft 1, 1 5, outline, CH 04 (Patreon)

Faith in the Family, Commentary, CH 4

Where Thomas can't seem to escape noticing the Sigma Theta Gamma brothers while at school

I wish there are more to say here, but most of the changes between 1 and 1.5 about to Ben adding details about university life I know nothing about, and getting the character’s personalities closer to who he sees them being.

So that’s it on the comments, I hope you enjoy the file.

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