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Hey! I've given it a lot of thought and decided to make some changes to Chapter 83. First, I replaced the POV with something that has much less information and also made the part with creating the construct a bit longer.

As some of you pointed out, and I agree, it was too soon for such a POV, and there are multiple things that came across much differently than I wanted them to. So, I'll give it some time, rewrite the POV, and use it in later chapters, or just straight up delete it.

There is one thing I want to point out, and it's important as I also dislike this trope - Nathaniel is not from a powerful or rich family. He doesn't have a special background as a prince or son of an angel or stuff that some Korean novels like to use.

As for Nathaniel being predestined for greatness or something like that. Sure, he is the MC so it's obvious that he's not some mob from the streets, but I want you to know that he was picked into the tutorial and Hell difficulty the same way more people were picked. People from his round of the tutorial, people from his group, and more people from different rounds of the tutorial.

As I showed before, 3750 people got in during his round of the tutorial and 250 of them got into Hell difficulty, so that's it.

Anyway, thanks for the feedback! I will also remove the comments so we won't spoil newer Patrons, and as for you, well, either sorry or consider it a bonus chapter :D

Comments

Kain01able

Always a balancing act with a narrative. Either way, I'm enjoying the insanity of our MCs situation.

ZaA

Always nice to see people who can take criticism and/or critique without getting angry and just look at it objectively. Story's been great and I'm excited to see where it goes (:

Zach

Dang, 3 days too late to the Patreon party.