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Tanta's Bargain: Page 14 & 15 (sketch WIP) (Patreon)

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2020-08-09 11:52:25
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2020-08-09 12:04:19
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Refined these pages today on stream, so thanks for everyone who made it to cheer me on! Gonna take today off of streaming to recover a bit, but I'll be right back at it after that.

Enjoy the update!


EDIT: there was an issue with page 15 related to text bubbles, I uploaded a fixed version.

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Toddly

Lookin interesting soo far

SpotTheCat

The dialogue box in page 14 is the same dialogue in the first box of page 15.

Katlek

Wouldn't the "I never saw them again" have a stronger impact if it was separated onto the second panel? Just a thought, hope you don't mind such opinions.

zaush
>>41885937

I could, yes! I had considered it, but something about it makes me think it would make the panels a bit too "one text box per panel". What do you think?

Katlek

Yeah, I see how that can make the panels look a little crowded. I'd give it a pass just this once, since such situation occurs only on this page, and that line with the mood of the second panel really fit together. :)

zaush
>>41940078

I've definitely got some edits I want to make before it goes to inks, so I'll consider this when it comes to that step and see how it feels. Thanks!