PGC #1 - Taking Flight (Patreon)

For: Frenetica
Word Count: 9380
Contains: Lesbian pairing, explicit sex, cunnilingus, high fantasy, divine transformation, angelic transformation, amazon transformation, hourglass expansion, female muscle growth, energy-based toys, fantasy combat, military drama, near-death experience, magic

Thoughts: As both my first commission and purposefully long story in a long time, I feel like there are a lot of things I could improve with my process. 

Specifically on this story, I was likely too ambitious with my initial plot. Trying to write a high fantasy story with transformation themes instead of a few long and detailed sex scenes is not above me, but I do feel like I missed the mark. Not to say I am unhappy with the story as is, but it falls short of what I envisioned. I am going to make a point of coming back to this in a flash piece of two and touch on the scenes I had to omit.

On a macro level, that I have done almost nothing besides work on this for the better part of a month is not where I wanted to be at this point. I will admit, It does not help that the last two weeks were insanely packed full of stuff and I really only wrote for a couple hours a day, but I am definitely only doing one commission a month for right now so that other productivity is not so destroyed.

The PDF will be exclusive for 24 hours. The story is going up on tumblr in three parts.