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Hi boys and girls,

I have a favor to ask of you.

I changed the story blurb on Royal Road based on some pushback I received in the comments and reviews. Can you look at the new blurb and tell me what you think?

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JJB4345_80_815

So, it looks good to me. I don't remember what the first blurb was and I have read the other comments and the response about changing it (removing spoilers), so I don't exactly know what to compare it to, but I like it. As it is right now I don't think that it's very spoiler-y while also conveying the overall tone of the story and a general idea of what to expect. 👍 Good job! 👏

james foster

I like the new blurb, can't really comment on a preference since I don't remember the old one.