Leo and ash comic: hygiene 2 wips? (Patreon)

right to left, first row then Second row.
These are very old, and I like them but also it is… old. It’s a part two of the first hygiene comic, where ash (who has intense skin sensitivity of many things) has been trying to get more comfortable in hygiene. Leo is his helper here, and after ash was able to handle (some) it, he has a renewed sense of determination To get it under his control.
tuesdays, are one of Leo’s wash days, and ash is going to participate in the Cleaning routine.
i also want ash to struggle, as in failing at times, as growth is never linear. And hygiene is very difficult for ash,  like for many other people. This is a very sweet part two, and I certainly get very good vibes haha, but I would like to make another comic where ash has doubts, and it worsens when trying to handle more cleaning. sensory issues can be managed, but its something that doesn’t go away,  and ash has his limits.

  A compromise of hygiene is due at the pinnacle of this mini storyline, where ash can handle more, but essentially it isnt a full routine. Some days he does one thing, other days he does others, and some things he can or may never handle. This is fine, as doing some is better than doing none. And at the same time, ash has a meter of stimulation for the day, and for the week/month. Things can become too much, everything at once Is now too hard to handle.  so in these times, what matters most is comfort, so that things can become manageable again. Ash feels frustrated at his loss of growth, but in the same moment, learns that things will always take time, and time is what he needs. (as well as limits that he May never surpass, and that too, is also something that he shouldn’t beat himself over about) there are ways around things! And it’s a learning process, which I want to depict later on.
idk its Rather ambitious, and i don’t want to make things strongly linear, since this story is almost episodic, with little topics here and there, and a small storyline in the midst.

if you read it this far, mind I ask if this comic seems good? This old one, which is one of two old comics. This being an unfinished pt 2 of hygiene.  I will of course make the bubbles more streamlined, the writing in text, so that it is more readable, and some of the heads better placed.  if I make more comics on them (hopefully) I’ll put them In a more traditional comic format.  I think Its quite cheesy, endearingly but also embarrassingly  haha.