Jupiter Jet Issue One Page 16 - Script to Page Comparison (Patreon)

Chuck holds up the blue sphere in his left hand and the green device in his right hand. He’s amazed by his discovery.

1. CHUCK: I think this green thing might have come from Dad. It’s exactly like the blue thing inside your jetpack! We always wondered where it came from!

2. CHUCK (LINKED BALLOON): And, I think the green thing can power a brand new jetpack!

PANEL 2

Jacky takes in what Chuck just told her. She’s slightly surprised.

1. JACKY:  Chuck, I know you miss Dad, but I don’t think --

2. JACKY (LINKED BALLOON): Wait a second - are you building a new jetpack?

PANEL 3

Chuck excitedly points his finger to ceiling in a giant “EUREKA” moment!

1. CHUCK: Not building. Already built! TO THE ROOF, SISTER!

PANEL 4

On the rooftop of their shop at night. Chuck is hovering a few feet above the roof. Around his waist is his toolbelt that you drew in the character designs, Ben. Except it now has a glowing green power compartment and we can see four exhaust pipes that keep Chuck afloat in the air.

1. CHUCK: Not bad, huh?