BSC 11: Entyar: The Ass Bend-Over: Script (Patreon)

The script is finished! I tried to justify the name by including some NTR in the story, but it's really not the focus... I'm personally not a huge fan of NTR... I think some of the themes can be hot, and I think the taboo element to it is exciting, but when the person being cheated on is getting half the focus of the thing, it mostly just takes me out of it. So I tried to do just a touch more than the minimum, but still keep it as a mostly background element.

Anyway, I've attached the script so anyone who wants to help me refine the story can read it and give me their critiques or suggestions... if you think anyone is acting out of character, or if you just have questions, let me know. I didn't go back and rewatch the show for this or anything, so I might have misremembered some details beyond just the stuff that had to be changed just to facilitate the porn setting (the characters are all aged up, and everyone is much more comfortable with sex and, y'know... half of them are hermaphrodites).

EDIT: Click here to download as a PDF