15-07: Early Access (Patreon)

I've been reading some more hentai lately, and I realized a big thing I've seen in a lot of them that i don't have in my comic is the sense of motion.  They tend to have a lot of motion lines and blurs and stuff like that, which I tend not to have quite as much of. So I'm trying to establish more motion and intensity in this page, and I think it adds more energy to the story. The other thing they have is sound effects, which I don't really have a lot of, but I think that's more of a cultural thing...