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This option won pretty handily in the latest poll. I wasn't certain entirely whether or not including the characters' names in the polls would affect the decision, but I hope it's not an issue. I wasn't sure if the exposition was too heavy handed in the first panel, but with a weekly comic like this sometimes you just have to go a little heavy on plot to keep things moving.


For those who don't recognize her, that's Gothin's character, Eve, at the end of the page, who you may recognize from this pinup. I had intended to include her as a member of the Nah-Ri tribe from fairly early on, since I felt her piercings matched well with Kat's. I had an idea that I hadn't really found a way to fit into the story, and I thought  I would like to get your opinions on this idea: since the Nah-Ri tribe sort of bans ejaculation by their tribe members, those who fail to resist the "temptations of the cock" are marked by piercings. So each piercing would represent a time when they lost control and got caught jacking off or something. You can see that one of the Nah-Ri girls in the first panel has a piercing  on her balls, but you can't see too much of the other girls.


So now we have the three demon girls... Sindra, Feuille, and Aqua Vert. We also establish in this page that Anastasia is still just Anastasia in this series (as opposed to "Ha-Na"). I figured since we've basically accepted the setup that Bianca and Anastasia are from off the island and have simply been transformed into futas by the monster girls that she would simply have a European name. Although I suppose it's still possible, if we go by one of the suggestions, that their eternal life doesn't also have eternal memory, that she might be using a different name by now.


Amongst the monster girls I kind of felt I had to add a few extra features to Feuille to keep her from looking too human. I mentioned before that I focused more on the idea of a wood nymph over the basic suggestion of an elf, since I don't personally consider elves to be "monster girls". So to keep her from just being a human with pointy ears and leaves in her hair I've also given her distinctly different eyes, and added greenish highlights onto her body to help make her look a bit more plantlike. The initial prompt for this page simply had the Monster Girls communicating telepathically, but I felt that kind of left Feuille out of this page a little. Sindra gets to show off her strength by showing a line of girls she's fucked into submission, and Aqua Vert shows off her shapeshifting powers as the body suit. So it made sense to me for Feuille to get a chance to show off her control of plants by using a pair of flowers as communication devices. I also wanted to establish that she doesn't have full control over the plants of the island at the moment... I feel like that would make her a little too overpowered for the rest of the comic if she can just effortlessly take complete control over every plant on the island, but I'm sure all the monster girls probably aren't at full strength either.

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CGI

I was not expecting a "motherly" Slimegirl, Although I suppose it suits her if you consider she may very well be the first/oldest. Sindra does suit that aggressive personality, I am thinking she and Bianca were a thing and she is feeling hurt and taking it out on those poor? erm.... Lucky? Nah-Ri. All we have from Feuille is that she seems to have a controlled personality and some authority. That was ocean! I was not sure what it was xD. I am still tired but I will come up with some suggestions later when I can think... All in all good page though! Aqua Vert's Pleasure suit was not what I was expecting at all, I was pleasently surprised :) Edit: return now posts.... I need to keep that in mind -_-

bananacreamcake

Some of the discussion about their personalities did actually suggest giving her a bit of a motherly, maternal attitude, and I felt that contrasted well with the other personalities, so I went in that direction with her. I imagine she's the type who acts very sweet at all times, even if it doesn't always match her actions... like when she's angry she'd be very rough but would be smiling and speak kindly the whole time.

Shotred

Nice Panel as far as the piercing idea I think that is interesting to go by, I love how Sindra personality is done. As for Elf I understand your reasoning which in fantasy lore there are different types which even I admit the wood elf is a standard cliche that is close to human. My favorite would be a dark elf it would fit the same problem.

Shotred

As for the story suggestions I think it should start with Sindra telling Aqua Vert to personally hold Anastasia and who ever is there before they get back, where Sindra is carrying the girls that she fucked to a place she call the breeding chamber which is her personal lair. Then the next scene takes place of Anastasia meeting the rest of Lily's pirate crew where she notice that Kat has broken the law for cumming and must pay for her crimes. ............ Another plot suggestion you can do instead is have Lily, Bianca, and maybe Jenna racing to warn the Nah-Ri group that the monster girls have been freed. Once they make to Anastasia personal chambers they see her sitting on her throne alone. What they don't know that the Anastasia they are talking to trying to warn the threat is actually Aqua Vert in disguise. Then it goes to Feuillie carrying the rest of Lily's crew, Kat, and some of the Nah-Ri tribe with her special plant powers while you see Sindra carry Anastasia telling her lover with a smile that it's been a while and that she will be the mother of her children from there pact long ago.

Quinn Adlard

yeah i think going with them being weakened from years of captivity would work to. i like the piercing thing. eve wouldd get caught breaking that alot, but in a kind of punky defiant way. also thank you for not making her s tan. i like this more than i thought. hmmm idk tho i didnt put thought into where this could go. also i have a cold and just got icy hot in my eye......um....what to do. i really don't know what to. hmmm ok so maybe this is like in a remote part of the village. and the rest of the tribe dosnt know yet like a watch tower area. ok so maybe this is like in a remote part of the village. and the rest of the tribe dosnt know yet like a watch tower area.so i'm thinking the monster girls had a temple where they lived and they had a sacred fruit tree there like has been said. at least a temple they wana get into but its been sealed and both chief has a gem needed to unlock it lock it like the jar. .. so next page we could see them talking about it like they went there first but couldnt get in. now there going to the chief to learn about this seal. sindra could do some more fucking and stuff. maybe make eve a little annoyed or angry with aqua. maybe some ball swelling this way i'm thinking we can have the girls meet the tribe and be interupted by the monsters and maybe the chief could send cat and the girls away with the gem while she holds off aqua. to meet with other tribe. or something later. still leaves the shape shifting open

Quinn Adlard

btw every one looks great. really great page

CGI

OK idea's on where to go next.... Righty, so How about we focus on Eve and Aqua Vert, I am thinking of going full Gonzo on Eve's butt and Pussy being "massaged" / penetrated by those tentacle feelers. She could be walking along in a drunken pleasure haze while leading her to the Village eventually having Eve screaming about how amazing it is and that the ecstasy she is feeling is worth the shame of 10000 piercings. They reach the village and Eve collapses to her knees then falls backwards arching her back with her cock at full mast in the air. Her Mission accomplished Aqua Vert goes full Slime girl pulling Eve's nipples and using her feelers to assault Eve's Glans, neck and butt Making her Cum so hard she can do nothing but lay there twitching completely satisfied, as Aqua Vert separates from Eve, Eve expresses a twinge of disappointment, Knowing that the likelyhood of her experencing such amazing sensations is unlikely with out Aqua Vert. Aqua Vert then lets the others know where the village is while watching Kat and Lily's crew enter curtain entrance :) Edit: return... posts... now... -_-

Shotred

Thats good I was thinking the same thing, I wanted Sindra and Feuille take the remaining girl to there lair while Aqua Vert is finding them.

Extremist Comics

This isn't as involved as the other suggestions but the fact that the Nah-Ri aren't allowed to ejaculate is very hot for some reason and I would like to see that played with. Watching futas handle intense pleasure and trying as hard as humanly possible not to cum will be incredible. Maybe the Nah-Ri have some kind of trial or punishment or initiation that involves the subject being pleasured as much as possible and having to hold out or face punishment.

John Doe

Well, what could happen next, I wonder? Maybe dedicate an entire page to each of the two remaining monster-girls who haven't really had sex yet. For the slime girl, you could have her transform into a cock sleeve and masturbate her prisoner until she comes in front of her tribe members, once she's led her to the village. Or perhaps she could slip into her captive's urethra, massaging her balls or caressing her uterus from the inside, so that she can remain unseen once they're in the village. Stealth Trojan horse-like section. Then, when her host is in Anastasia's hut, Aqua Vert could squeeze her prostate, making the futa cum all that slime and revealing the monster-girl. As for the spriggan, I still think that it'd be cool to have her completely devoid of genitals, so that she can only get pleasure via the nature she controls. This could result in some nice tentacle-plants on futas action, with Feuille having telepathic orgasms each time one of her tentacles ejaculates. As for some of her other powers, she could also project her mind into any existing plant to spy on anyone on the island, especially people having sex because she likes to watch. Maybe this could lead to her watching Anastasia having sex with Lily's crew, in some kind of vignette sequence, while she sucks on one of her own tentacle-plants (which would feel like a self-blowjob). Or, we could go see what's going on between Lily's crew and Anastasia, before Aqua Vert shows up in the village. Like, maybe have Anastasia be in awe before the three girls, not believing that "pure", penis-less women can exist. She'd go into "Wayne's World mode", saying that she is not worthy to be visited by goddesses such as them and worshipping them, offering them gold and riches. Perhaps Anastasia could be very ashamed of having a huge dick, only having sex for procreation's sake and feeling guilty of enjoying it so much everytime. Queue Liang plotting to take advantage of the situation, because she's quite fond of money and big-ass dicks. She could talk Anastasia into having sex with her and her two friends, for the greater good, as well. Being an anthropologist, Dahpne would see this as a good occasion to study mating habits. And Brunhilde might want to join in because being religious seriously impacted her sex-life and she needs to let off some of that frustration. Then, once the fucking is done, the slime-girl could appear. That piercing idea is a nice touch, I gotta say. And so is the chieftains being immortal, basically.