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When I first conceived of this chapter like... at least a year ago (maybe two?) the initial plan was for this to actually be a ploy by Anastasia, who would brainwash Inara and send her to Jenna's house to get cum. Partly this was to explain why she would agree to sex in the first place, but by the time I got to actually writing this chapter I realized I didn't really like that idea. Inara and Jenna's relationship is, I think, engaging enough to stand on its own and I think it makes the sex better with the two of them both honestly into it. The only downside to this change was that I couldn't really think of an interesting or impactful ending to the story... I tried to focus more on Jenna's loving and kind nature, instead of just having a big twist or something at the end.

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DarkKnight12

This is actually a good start to their relationship. I think it’s healthy for Inara to take things slow and happier to get her mind on the right things. Plus, with her history with Jenna, I think it’ll work out in the end. Plus, imagining Inara’s reaction to seeing Karen’s actual relationship with Jenna would be a HUGE revelation.

LordSykos

This chapter was absolutely amazing! Love anytime you play with size and muscle, but this one really stood out for me. Tons of great shots throughout it. Well done! I think this worked out so much better than it would have with your original idea. Their relationship and history here felt pretty natural and it was actually nice to not have a twist here. Yeah there wasn't too much to the ending, but I'm ok with ending the chapter on a sort of heartwarming note. Plus I'm excited for when Inara meets the rest of the group, fun times to be had!

Mars Project

I can't seem to find any flaws to this chapter whatsoever, it is HOT, charming and even a bit sweet and romantic. Probably gonna be one of my fav's of the whole thing.