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And with that, the chapter is finished! Lol I know there was some concern about whether or not Nina would end up pregnant by the end of this, but although she didn't end up pregnant, I still wanted the chance of it to have a long-term effect on the story, especially with Nina's growing suspicion about Anastasia.

These past two chapters were the longest I had ever done, and part of that was because I was responding to criticisms that there wasn't enough sex in the comic, so both chapters had very long sex scenes, sort of sandwiched between some simple, but revelatory story sequences.

I've had a few readers tell me, though, that they would actually prefer more focus on story going forward. I realized that the people who complained about not enough sex are also not the kind of people who support the Patreon or seem to even particularly like the comic. So that's the focus I'll have in the next chapter! We're going to have another Jenna-focused issue, and although there will still be plenty of sex, I'm going to allow myself to spend some time focused on story. If you're a fan of Jenna's personality instead of just watching her fuck everyone she sees (although there's still gonna be some of that) I think you'll enjoy it.

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Extremist Comics

I support a balance. I've written comics where my editor gave me notes about keeping the sexual content the focus, so I obviously tend to get into the plot even with porn. To me, it's best when they intertwine in such a way that the story couldn't be told without the porn. BCC has that, I would say.

bananacreamcake

Thanks :) I definitely want it to be a story about sex, and not just a story where characters take a break to have sex in the middle of unrelated stuff

jmcscore

What EC said above for me as well. If we want more of the plot, it means that we enjoy the comic and are engaged in it. The comic would be poorer not having the porn and the plot. Basically, you're doing a good job and look forward to more. BTW, that pregancy test is hilarious! Definatly some quality writing there!

LordSykos

OH THANK GOD! Nina in the 4th panel accurately sums up how I feel right now! I've expressed my feelings about story and sex here before. I also agree with the above comments here. It is good for one to complement the other. Even if a chapter is 90% sex it can still work to service the plot. The only bad thing would be purposeless sex for the sake of sex. But you seem to be aware of that so I have faith that won't become a problem. You are doing a good job and I look forward to what is to come. I'm also just so relieved I don't have to worry about Nina anymore for a while :D

Kenneth

I definitely agree with the above sentiment. A little more story is never a bad thing. Shoehorning in a sex scene with EVERYTHING just ultimately sullies the story moments. And it definitely sounds like the people that are complaining about “not enough sex stuff” are going to complain no matter what.

PictoNoMii

Yeah, the people who read the comic on comicfury never seem happy.