BCC 43-49: Hi-Res Early Access (Patreon)

I am having fun with the Moon Goddess... her dialogue is a little tricky to write, since I want to reinforce that she doesn't talk like a normal person, but not to such a degree that she comes off as bizarre or goofy. I almost just went all-in and had her speak all "Thee, Thou, thine" style... I even considered stealing something from Discworld and have her speak with numbers at the start... I'm not sure what the right word for it is, but it's like how if you read the bible each line starts with like "Austin 3:16 - Shut your Mouth"... anyway, aside from just being a gag already in a Discworld book, I also realized it would just look silly and would be very distracting during sex scenes.