First Feedback Post! (Patreon)

Today's featured patron very graciously gave me permission to share the redlines I did for them!

They presented this straightforward picture of two characters embracing, more or less...

The Original Piece

But even straightforward pieces have a lot you need to look out for! Here's what I remarked on...

Okay, so! There's not a LOT to look out for. Just some basic stuff you  really gotta keep in mind like, the Spine (generally, the line going  from the head to the pelvis) and foreshortening. 

Later on, I could get more into composition and even stuff like facial structure if requested. But for now, these are my notes for today!

Hope it helps!