Toph Heavy Part 3 - Chapter 3 - Page 4 Render WIP (Patreon)

Normally I'd put this in the WIP tier but I want feedback from anyone about this. I've been struggling with this render for the past few days. This is one of my favorite pages and so I'm being a little more picky than usual. I'm not sure about the rim light which is why it isn't in the second panel yet. I'm going to take a break from it, work on some other things, and let my mind reset. Hopefully, I'll make better decisions when I come back to it. In the meantime, I'd like to know your thoughts about what I've got so far.