Nerissa Loop (Patreon)

There's definitely still some room for improvement but I think its definitely a step up.

 Already started working on the Shiori anim a couple days ago and Im really liking how its going already. I think the Calli and Kiara animation had its moments but looking back on it, as a whole, I think it s like a 6/10.  I will be correcting what I think was lacking in that anim in the shiori anim. Just a few things like:

-Flow. I think the start of the CnK anim was good with the deepthroat -> insert -> eyes -> mish, but I think it kind of falls off after that into just additional shot of mish then a couple shots of doggy. With how I have the Shiori anim planned out it should carry out that flow/momentum through the whole.

-Position variety. The CnK anim only had like 2 and a half positions. Shiori anim will have with two of those having two angles. The whole thing will be 9 shots including small transition shots.

-Making better shots. If I went back I would do small changes like the shot of there boobs rubbing together more of a side angle and zoomed out and had them like kissing or something too. Just small things like that

lastly is just general knowledge/skill that I learned from studies, small tweaks to compositing process etcetcetc.

anyway autism over, ill see yall again soon :y