Putting On A Show | Part 3 | Rejected composition and new rough (Patreon)

I spent the day tinkering on the next "Putting On A Show" illustration, although as I worked on it I began to feel dissatisfied with the composition. The main aspect that I wanted to portray was the throat-knotting Terry was doing to Corey, but it was looking cramped... I didn't like that so much of Corey's head was being obscured.

And so, late in the workday, I decided to scrap it and start again with a different take on it. I'm liking the top-down view more, and I think I'm going to enjoy drawing Terry's O-face. 💦